Retro and camp, but still a pretty cool thing to watch.

maybe too many circles up there



http://www.threadless.com/critique/29013/Tomato_heart

The placement is a bit awkward. Maybe move it down a bit so it bleeds off the bottom, that way you're not crowding the globs at the top. The scribbly marks at the bottom are a bit out of place too. Maybe try making it look more like globs of floating stuff instead of a mound of chewed gum.



Also, this would really pop on a blue shirt. Either navy or turquoise.

I love the idea and placement, perhpas some different color variations? Orange is nice, but I think that a lot of people don't wear orange. I''d wear this one though. just a suggestion.



please critique mine: Choose your Weapon

Thanks for the insights.

Details will be added to make it more realistic when it's almost ready to submit.

I still think the globs around the neck look crowded. It's like you ran out of room when drawing.

This is a quick sketch. Let me know if it has merit and I'll fill in the details.

nice sketch!!! i think it's very awesome lava but is purple the best color for the T-shirt?



please critique this!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29170/NEO_FIRE_FOX

wow this has progressed nicely. i agree on the purple shirt not being the best color. Just a heads up, i read somewhere that threadless only does single color belt print.

sorry forgot to add



Comments Appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29280/Burn_Ye_Non_Believers#v2

Now?

Does the red color shirt work well?

i like it. depending on the shade of red of the shirt and ink, you may need more contrast or some kind of light outline. and i would suggest pulling it down to the bottom (see the dotted line?).



Comments Appreciated:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29448/Scatter_Shot

hey got nice lava out there. :)

i think the color is geting realy in to eyes

i dont knw why

is it red or dark orange ??

i would say ur design is perfect

loved :)

Thanks. I sent it to submissions and got it returned "send to critique".

Any ideas why?

can't tell you anything that i see but make sure you read thru the subbmision packet again... it might be a small detail you are missing...



on a different note have you tried to maybe size the design differetly? work of of the shape of a lava lamp and place it to the side (right maybe) of the tee to make it look more like a lava lamp...



check me out:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31173/stomped_on

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29529/i_have_beef_with_you

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29526/find_one_another

Now in complementary colors - soooo, give me some complements.

There are some tee textures floating around, you should present this design on them instead of a blank tee. Also, I think this would benefit from a little softness, like anti-aliasing. Just a touch, to get rid of some of the sharpness.

And it's funny, but I actually like the analogous colour scheme better than the complimentary one.

Put textures on it, and it'll be a lot better. Also, I would put some anti-alias on the lava, they look kind of scratchy at the edges.

This is the vector version - rasterized and reduced. The edges are really smooth in reality.

i like it on purple. i have a purple and yellow lava lamp in my room...

I think too big.

I think it is a bit too large as well; there should be some more space around the design. Shirt colour choice is great though, nice use of complements. Comment on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/31119/little_beluga_s_big_spout

So how does it look on a tee on a body?

It looks good. You should put something on the sleeves.