I have a fascination with the Death Head Hawk Moth, which was present in "The Silence of the Lambs, " among other movies and books.



I wanted to do something cool and simple.

i love it... i especially like the simplicity..... i like it better on black..... but i would move it to the center of the shirt....and i think it might even look cool without the skull....



would love to hear what u tihnk of mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28873/The_Buddha_amp_the_Blossom

You should focus on the moth a lot more. The skull from the cover of Silence of The Lambs is from a Salvador Dali photo of women posed in such a way as to look like a skull.



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So yeah, focus on the moth more.



Can you take a look at mine?

the colours combination is new, good!

like it on black

ok I expected not to like this from the thumbnail but was pleasantly surprised. I like the moth, the red circle and the blue trails, but the star and the green bits just don't quite seem to fit. Maybe add more red drippy circles in varying sizes?

I redid the moth. Centered the design, and tried adding another circle as mentioned.



Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

I also added a bit more drip too.

It works a lot better with the second circle, maybe try adding more smaller ones? I love how it weaves in and out of the blue lines.

add more details to it...it is too simple for a subject i think...

Thanks, I'll keep working on it.

more details and work on colors. At the moment it feels somewhat wrong.

Could become something real nice.



critique needed http://www.threadless.com/critique/29125/He_Can_Fly_o

i think it looks good minus the skull and centered..... maybe make the second circle a bit smaller....





thanks for ur comment... i made some changes...lemme know what u think



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28860/Masai

Okay, based on the feedback... I added a third circle. And added more details to the design. I've put the 3 main stages/cycle of the moth, from pupae to moth.



I redid the skull. I do think the skull should be there, because of the specimen type.



Let me know if this is better. Thanks!

What do you think?

Any thoughts?

hey eladear,

this is quite different from your freudian slip design. cool.



i think this is another strong piece of yours and think that it has a chance to make it, but i think there are some slight changes needed to make it stronger.



the pupa has a tangent on the circle, just overlapping it a bit would solve that problem.



i think that overlapping the caterpillar and its circle would help too.



to be really picky, there is a dot of red showing behind the moth's left wing to erase quickly.



instead of placing the design directly in the middle, have you considered placing it asymmetrically, like down the left side?



also last thing, i think the lines and circles off to the side make it appear more aquatic. are they suppose to be something specific? i think that your design and concept are strong enough to stand on their own and leave out those add ins.



good luck to you and if you want to tear apart my own design, feel free to at hey, will you do me a favor if you have a second and go to http://www.threadless.com/critique/29307/Love_Machine

i put up a design that i'm getting critiqued before i submit it

Thanks for the feedback. If you look at the first version, I started with the design to the left. Viewers asked that I put it to the center.



The circles represent "cycle," each stage of the moth.

Made corrections to the design. Testing with a diagonal position, across t-shirt as if it is flying out.