In the style of a kind of field manual/first-aid guide - it will be a 9 part design eventually, including the 'impact' and the 'celebration'. Just thought I'd post what I had.



And yes - I did reference the diagram from google images. It's a parody, after all :)

Haha. This rings true in my life. Who'd have thought giving someone the tombstone would have hurt? The guys on telly seemed fine after a short while to recuperate.



By the way I may give you an email at some point in the future. Just so you'll be ready.

Good ol' fatheed. I'm looking forward to seeing this one completed, submitted and (likely) printed!



Comments?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28947/The_Saddest_Tree

This will sell to every frat boy in north america! Looking forward to seeing it finished.





I need some help from a threadless veteran! Is mine ready for the Loves Travel contest?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28939/ROUTE_MAP

is this a print or a tee? This is awesome...I laughed out loud...fo reals.



Crit Please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28925/Paper_Birdy#v4

Thanks dudes :)

I seriously spoke to wullagaru a week or two ago about doing a design that was a diagram of wrestling moves.

I totally want to die now.

fatheed, you're the king,



please crit my design



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28925/fuckuspammers



SERIOUSLY people, stop spamming the critique pages

Rough layout.

I just want to point out that I love you, fatheed.

you can spot your style a mile away, and it's awesome.

can't wait to see the finished design here.

awesome

this could be your second best ever imho

amusng, do you have a size and placement in mind?



please critique mine: Choose your Weapon

Better and better! Could it be possible to condense a few of the frames?

It looks like the guy found a dead body to body slam.

maybe he did!

I think this may be it. Feedback appreciated.

That is soooo awesome!

I love your work and I wear your shirt (I'm sure I Used To Fit)



I laughed out loud when I saw this... The way the unconciouss (Forgive my spelling!) man is just slumped over the shoulders. I like the fact that there are no faces as well because with faces alot of people tent to be alot more harsh with them. And I think that the fact there is no colour makes it look good too. I think it's because with colour it would be harder to process in one's brain what is actually happening.



I think it's great! I'd fully wear this if it gets subbed.



It would be such an honour if you checked out my design in progress... and my design that I've submitted and am waiting for approval.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29083/Seahorse_Horse

And

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28575/So_Where_do_Baby_Storks_Come_From



Good luck Fatheed! And sub this soon!

hahaha, great work

love it. def think the flames in the first frame could use some work.

I really like how you added something so minuscule to your design and it changed the feel of the whole thing. The random body before made the design seem very contrived and shallow, but the simple addition of a flaming door added so much complexity. I'm impressed. I really like the "safety tutorial" feel of it.



I would offer suggestions, but you already know what you're doing. This design's crit process is for us, I get it.

this is pure awesome!!!



in v2 I was wondering if you were going to show how he found a man lying on the ground, but in v3 the flames explain everything and nothing at the same time, but that is what makes this so amazing!

submit this, totally amazing!

hahahahahahahaha omg

hahahhahah submit it!

comment my design! thanks!

Awesome. Submit this; there is nothing in my opinion that could make this better.



Paper Space Travel

i laughed so hard when i saw this. The guy holding his hands up in the last frame is the best part. id like to see color options though.



Any thoughts?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29124/Ipod_Baby

PLacement?

Otherwise it's GREAT!!!

So place it well because it can destroy it a bit ;)



favor? http://www.threadless.com/critique/29125/He_Can_Fly_o

hillarious.... this is definitely it...!! submit!



also... would u mind critiquing mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28860/Masai

Hey Don't Submit person! Please gimme feedback. If there is something you think need fixing or even if you plain don't like the idea. Let me know? I value all opinions xxx

hmmm. like how it looks on a tee, but the dark lines kinda fade into the background (the ropes and door frame, etc). maybe on a different tee color?



Please check mine out:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29132/Grown_From_Within#v2

yeah - I agree. I did think about that. I tried to get the colour close to the photo tone, but I know Dakota slate is much lighter in thr flesh. I'm wearing one now actually.



I'll make it lighter. brb. Cheers!

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey there.



Why are there two different coloured T-shirts... The girl's T-shirt looks good, because of the colour. But the guys T-shirt is darker and has a shade of blue.... and you can't see the black lines... so I'm a little confused about what colour you want... I think just stick with the colour on the girl.

I still love it though!



Please comment on mine if you have the time!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29083/Seahorse_Horse

very cool.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28940/Head_Invaders

haha, I love it - I think it will go over well. Submit!

Thanks :)



* NOW SUBBED HERE *

sweet cant wait to vote $5 on it...