In the style of a kind of field manual/first-aid guide - it will be a 9 part design eventually, including the 'impact' and the 'celebration'. Just thought I'd post what I had.
And yes - I did reference the diagram from google images. It's a parody, after all :)
Haha. This rings true in my life. Who'd have thought giving someone the tombstone would have hurt? The guys on telly seemed fine after a short while to recuperate.
By the way I may give you an email at some point in the future. Just so you'll be ready.
I love your work and I wear your shirt (I'm sure I Used To Fit)
I laughed out loud when I saw this... The way the unconciouss (Forgive my spelling!) man is just slumped over the shoulders. I like the fact that there are no faces as well because with faces alot of people tent to be alot more harsh with them. And I think that the fact there is no colour makes it look good too. I think it's because with colour it would be harder to process in one's brain what is actually happening.
I think it's great! I'd fully wear this if it gets subbed.
It would be such an honour if you checked out my design in progress... and my design that I've submitted and am waiting for approval.
I really like how you added something so minuscule to your design and it changed the feel of the whole thing. The random body before made the design seem very contrived and shallow, but the simple addition of a flaming door added so much complexity. I'm impressed. I really like the "safety tutorial" feel of it.
I would offer suggestions, but you already know what you're doing. This design's crit process is for us, I get it.
in v2 I was wondering if you were going to show how he found a man lying on the ground, but in v3 the flames explain everything and nothing at the same time, but that is what makes this so amazing!
Hey Don't Submit person! Please gimme feedback. If there is something you think need fixing or even if you plain don't like the idea. Let me know? I value all opinions xxx
yeah - I agree. I did think about that. I tried to get the colour close to the photo tone, but I know Dakota slate is much lighter in thr flesh. I'm wearing one now actually.
Why are there two different coloured T-shirts... The girl's T-shirt looks good, because of the colour. But the guys T-shirt is darker and has a shade of blue.... and you can't see the black lines... so I'm a little confused about what colour you want... I think just stick with the colour on the girl.
And yes - I did reference the diagram from google images. It's a parody, after all :)