i had this idea floating around my head for a few ideas so i had to draw it. i liked the symbolism. there are some things you can't bury deep enough

i just want a few comments just a few

I think it at least needs some color. But I don't get what the tip of the flower is supposed to be, is it just a blossoming flower or is it a butt?

ha ha its definitely not a butt. i'll work on that

I'd like to see how it looks on a shirt. The ground is kinda bothering me, it seems thin at the moment, I'd fill it out a bit or maybe add something underneath.

k thanks i'll keep workin with it

This is really pretty. I just think the main flower needs a little bit of work...



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Oh come on! Of course he hasn't got any colour! He is just wondering if the CONCEPT and GENERAL IDEA of this design is good enough to work on!



Go specnermon! This design rocks!

thanks for all the comments. it really helps

thanks for the heads up on that.



i like the concept of this..all the things you want to get away from yet they tug on you.

I like the concept but I feel it needs to be touched up with shading under the petals and also the ground. I do like this though...better than the 80's themed shirts ; )