boo?

Please don't just mark "needs work" without giving me something to work on.

bump

Is any of that clip art?



Also, you should bring it all in together so it looks like one cohesive design, instead of several seperate elements.



Comments?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28947/The_Saddest_Tree

Id say attach all that stuff in a creative way to the speech bubble and make it one strong design instead of several disconnected ones. I understand you are going for abstract...but you have to make a point by making it flow. Make people respect what you are trying to say....dont give them a reason to tear it down!



Good luck buddy!

Crit Please??

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28925/Paper_Birdy

NO...not feelin it

nice elements,

especially the bleeding wing part

agreeing with keith and mike

Aw, I had a whole thing typed up and it didn't get submitted...



@Keith, It's a lot of vector stocks. I was playing around with stuff and it just evolved into this.



@Mike, I totally agree. I was actually thinking of adding something like that myself.

Taking another stab at this

looks better than the first by far, good work....

I could do without the speech bubble. Otherwise, this is golden.

A lotttt better

I'd buy this

I wish the guys who marked not to submit it would have mentioned why, but thanks to the people who left comments.

not sure about the blood drip. the colors don't go with it so much but I' know its probably your theme.



please critique mine: Choose your Weapon

Agreed not sure on the blood. I do like it thou.

blood is GOOD! =)



yes loose the text i would say!



how would it look on a shirt?

Is this placement good?

Make it bigger or less bigger.

Now it's like you made it just fit the edges of the tee.

Can they print along the sides of a tee? I've seen some shirts where there's a terrible looking line along the sides of the shirt where the image stops. I was trying to have it as big as possible while avoiding that.

Well depends on the site your posting on. Here I would make it a little smaller to be sure ;)

comment? http://www.threadless.com/critique/29125/He_Can_Fly_o

This is sweet. I would wear it without the blood and text.



Any thoughts?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29132/Grown_From_Within

bump

I'm just not digging the use of stock vector images. That's like using stock loops to make music.

I also would like it without the text..maybe? And definitely make it smaller and place upper off centre. Digging the halftones.



If you have time I'd love feedback on mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27704/My_brain_is_fried

or comment on my first submission :)

@Chemicalflava, Your argument isn't without reason, but the resources are there for artists to use. The fact that I used a lot of them does nothing to change that.



@everyone else, I'll gather a bunch of different placements and post them soon.

possible placements...

For the love of God, people, don't just mark "don't submit" without leaving any feedback.

Its got potential, but it's soo abstract it could do well or flop. Its just one of those designs that is love it or hate it. I say centralize it, and make it a little more pleasing to the eye by giving the upper teeth a chance.

I'll see about adding some teeth :p

Needs to be less cut and paste. Good concept tho. Hit me back

What do you mean by "cut and paste"?

I like the first or the second.

Critique mine?

i like the second placement..... but im still not liking the text...

thanks for all ur advice on my design..



one of my designs is in the running... hope u'll vote



http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature

text/no text?

cool you should go with centre placement

i dont like cmy teeth tho

I say no text

thats very morbid.

I dont like the placement, i think center would be better.

Its a cool design man.



Critique mine please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30578/Optical_Illusions

I'll post a new version soon with no text and a few more placements.

And now?

bump

Anyone at all...