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Gymdawg on Sep 24 '08
boo?
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Gymdawg on Sep 24 '08
Please don't just mark "needs work" without giving me something to work on.
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Gymdawg on Sep 25 '08
bump
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keithcw on Sep 25 '08
Is any of that clip art?
Also, you should bring it all in together so it looks like one cohesive design, instead of several seperate elements. Comments? http://www.threadless.com/critique/28947/The_Saddest_Tree |
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mikefalzone on Sep 25 '08
Id say attach all that stuff in a creative way to the speech bubble and make it one strong design instead of several disconnected ones. I understand you are going for abstract...but you have to make a point by making it flow. Make people respect what you are trying to say....dont give them a reason to tear it down!
Good luck buddy! Crit Please?? http://www.threadless.com/critique/28925/Paper_Birdy |
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Cyarhia on Sep 25 '08
NO...not feelin it
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d a n g on Sep 25 '08
nice elements,
especially the bleeding wing part agreeing with keith and mike |
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Gymdawg on Sep 25 '08
Aw, I had a whole thing typed up and it didn't get submitted...
@Keith, It's a lot of vector stocks. I was playing around with stuff and it just evolved into this. @Mike, I totally agree. I was actually thinking of adding something like that myself. |
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Gymdawg on Sep 26 '08
Taking another stab at this
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ObligedBeef on Sep 27 '08
looks better than the first by far, good work....
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gradinDotCom on Sep 27 '08
I could do without the speech bubble. Otherwise, this is golden.
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mgrice on Sep 27 '08
A lotttt better
I'd buy this |
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Gymdawg on Sep 27 '08
I wish the guys who marked not to submit it would have mentioned why, but thanks to the people who left comments.
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CharlieArt on Sep 27 '08
not sure about the blood drip. the colors don't go with it so much but I' know its probably your theme.
please critique mine: Choose your Weapon |
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Bennyman on Sep 28 '08
Agreed not sure on the blood. I do like it thou.
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Krylon69 on Sep 28 '08
blood is GOOD! =)
yes loose the text i would say! how would it look on a shirt? |
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Gymdawg on Sep 28 '08
Is this placement good?
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Breaky on Sep 28 '08
Make it bigger or less bigger.
Now it's like you made it just fit the edges of the tee. |
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Gymdawg on Sep 28 '08
Can they print along the sides of a tee? I've seen some shirts where there's a terrible looking line along the sides of the shirt where the image stops. I was trying to have it as big as possible while avoiding that.
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Breaky on Sep 28 '08
Well depends on the site your posting on. Here I would make it a little smaller to be sure ;)
comment? http://www.threadless.com/critique/29125/He_Can_Fly_o |
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scotties123 on Sep 28 '08
This is sweet. I would wear it without the blood and text.
Any thoughts? http://www.threadless.com/critique/29132/Grown_From_Within |
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Gymdawg on Sep 28 '08
bump
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chemicalflava on Sep 28 '08
I'm just not digging the use of stock vector images. That's like using stock loops to make music.
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Buzzibee on Sep 28 '08
I also would like it without the text..maybe? And definitely make it smaller and place upper off centre. Digging the halftones.
If you have time I'd love feedback on mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27704/My_brain_is_fried or comment on my first submission :) |
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Gymdawg on Sep 28 '08
@Chemicalflava, Your argument isn't without reason, but the resources are there for artists to use. The fact that I used a lot of them does nothing to change that.
@everyone else, I'll gather a bunch of different placements and post them soon. |
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Gymdawg on Sep 28 '08
possible placements...
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Gymdawg on Sep 29 '08
For the love of God, people, don't just mark "don't submit" without leaving any feedback.
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Ron Design Studio on Sep 29 '08
Its got potential, but it's soo abstract it could do well or flop. Its just one of those designs that is love it or hate it. I say centralize it, and make it a little more pleasing to the eye by giving the upper teeth a chance.
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Gymdawg on Sep 29 '08
I'll see about adding some teeth :p
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Needs to be less cut and paste. Good concept tho. Hit me back
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Gymdawg on Sep 29 '08
What do you mean by "cut and paste"?
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element_101 on Sep 29 '08
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annienaseem on Sep 30 '08
i like the second placement..... but im still not liking the text...
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annienaseem on Oct 02 '08
thanks for all ur advice on my design..
one of my designs is in the running... hope u'll vote http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature |
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Gymdawg on Oct 26 '08
text/no text?
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fredsicle on Oct 26 '08
cool you should go with centre placement
i dont like cmy teeth tho |
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lefameux on Oct 26 '08
I say no text
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ggepic on Oct 26 '08
thats very morbid.
I dont like the placement, i think center would be better. Its a cool design man. Critique mine please: http://www.threadless.com/critique/30578/Optical_Illusions |
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Gymdawg on Oct 28 '08
I'll post a new version soon with no text and a few more placements.
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