first sketch, should i pursue this?

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you should add a background, arena or something

yeah, now add some color.

thanks, i'll be adding another version today.

thats why its a sketch both people that commented haha.



im confused though whats the joke?

Winna winna chiken dinna!

correct spelling:

Winner Winner Chicken Dinner!

winner winner chicken dinner?



I have never heard this expression.

you should do some more research Mr. Genious

progress!

I almost wish there was someway to make it look more like a chicken. I thought it was turkey until I read the comments.

^ lol

eh, winner winner turkey dinner?

very funny!

buzzzz, you got it lol

and now for something completely different...

lol! make it darker?



hit mine up: She Lies version 2

I actually really like v2 a lot! I think you should keep playing around with it.. You could throw it on a shirt and I think it'd be ready to sub.



Ok, eric.. I need your insight on my design :P

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28859/Inspiration

I like the first concept better... especially in sketch style.

thanks OhBeau and eladear! I need to get back on this one... i have too many wips' at the moment!

you nailed it with V2...i dont like this

v2 is IT!

ok, i went back to V2 and made a few minor changes...

Hahah.

Nice.

But do people actually say the saying?

I haven't heard of anyone actually saying it....

Hmm...





The Way The Sun Hits Her

I've never heard it before either, only on the internet... It is a bad pun but i'm curious to see how it will do here.

haha

i like it

i've heard it

it's funny.



the pen work seems lost on the blond guy's head though :\ sorta weird.

Yea, i redrew the blond guys head, i'll have to darken him up before subbing.

prefer v2 :)

^i think i'll have to agree.

i think the blond guy stands out way too much. the only big spot of yellow in the image is his head, and he becomes more of a focal point than the winner. especially from far away.

ok, so V2 or V5?

I'm sorry my friend, but this isn't really my style.. Maybe try to make something funny of it.

Your title says "winner winner" (Chicken dinner?) maybe it would be fun if the 3 winners would be 3 chickens with little oldskool trunks and Nike Air or something like that.

Personally I think this is kinda unexpressive & dull.. But I believe there's a public for this so good luck with it!

v5

I'm not really enthusiastic about this design anymore. I may sub this somewhere else or just scrap it all together. Any suggestions on where this might do well?!