flame would be in uv ink please comment

shouldn't the flame come out of the barrel, they normally do. also gun looks a bit simplistic.

I thought of bubbles coming out of the barrel instead. would this be better? or should i try moving the flame

How in the world would that thing have a flame there?

Haven't you fired a gun before?

The whole concept of getting the bullet through the barrel is that it has a high pressure (gun powder explosion) forcing it out.

not if its a lighter

"I thought of bubbles coming out of the barrel instead. would this be better? or should i try moving the flame"



Yeah, I would like that better. I thought of the lighter, but go with the bubbles.



JDC

ok ill be working on a bubble version tomorrow

thanks for your comment JDC

I actually like the unexpected placement of the flame. Maybe you could make it even more unexpected or even make it so the bullet is coming out of an unexpected location.

It would certainly suck for the guy in the picture if the bullet came out of the flame's current position



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Marsupial in my Pocket

seems a bit bland. maybe add something that needs to be lit... like a ciggarrrette or something.... wow i completely just spelled that wrong.



if u have time, please check mine out.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29167/Good_Grief#v2

I like the bubble idea, and don't UV inks work better on lighter shirts?



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