Here is my first design. I'll have the next two edited versions really soon.

Okay, here is the seond one.

better, but the mouth/ neck region of the human looks awkward...



Can you show a more detailed thumbnail of the area?

how about scale down the birds at the left bottom part and increase the size of the flying guy..and slightly rotate the guy?

I think this is fantastic, but possibly add a little blue around the feet of the stork in the water and the two plants to elaborate that there is water.

i like your idea......nice!!

It has definaely improved from the First version. Congrats! Its a really nice idea. The face does look a little tight. Maybe a bit more expression could be added. But yeah thats only minor so I thinks its good to go :-)

that is very cool but people don't fly!



Could you check out my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28640/The_Eye

Here is the latest version with blue water and a bit more expression... tell me if I need more expression, and just any other general comments you have. Thankyou.

haha i like the idea,

where do baby storks come from? :-D

I don't really like the creme shirt, but maybe that's just me,

other people might like it.

But it's nicely drawn and i like that you didn't colour in the plants fully.

I hope i said that right :-)

for me personally the style is a little bit to serieus for a shirt, but

I say send it in!

Are there any other colour shirt suggestions? Or is cream O-Kay?

ha ha ha! this is AWESOME! much better then your first version, i say it's time to sub it!

I like it! The color and the artwork is simple but done well.



Comment on mine please :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28633/She_lies

Nice idea)))))))))))))))

To me, the right foot (left for the guy in the image) looks twisted.



The idea behind the tee is funny, though I'm not sure the art style matches.



Nicely drawn, tho.

I made this top by lying on the grund infront of a white blanket, and then I traced the outline and scanned it onto the computer, before editing it on Adobe Flash.



So hmmm.... that 'twisted leg' is an outline of my own leg. Soooooooo I don't know how I could fix it because it's as close to the real thing as possible.

I like it. Very nice style.

I like this, it's not something I'd wear myself but it's a really intelligent design. I really like it.

Looks great.

Submit.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28144/quot_The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her_quot

This is great! Submit!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28697/Escaped_from_Rehab

Thanks MilyGrae!

interesting idea. The color scheme works well. Only suggestions...maybe tamper with the eyes so that the "deliverer" is looking down at the expectant parent....and I don't know that you need to show the collar bone (if that's what it is) I think it'll read well enough w/o it. Pretty nice though.



check out mine, if you have time:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/27457/life_in_death

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28064/stand_alone

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28638/Night_Rider

The color needs to stay natural to go with a lake w/ birds kind of setting. I think creme works well and sand might be a good option too



plz give feedback on my design if you don't mind:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28720/Athena_s_Identity_Crisis

This is almost perfect! However, I agree with the other commenters; the right leg needs to be fixed, and the person should be looking at the mother stork. Great concept for sure though!

For some reason, I liked the way the legs were in the first couple of versions. Great concept!

This is my last submission to the critique section before submitting it.



So if it gets rejected I'll bring it back to the drawing board... but for now... wish me luck!

Lol, this is the same as V5 but without the number of colours I used.

it's time to send it in

Yes I actually have sent it in! Wish me luck! I accidentally sent it twice though, because the computer jammed the instant I sent it in, and the page went all white and it didn't say if it had been sent or not. so I refreshed the page and that must have re sent it, but it still jammed and I could't tell so I opened up a new window and looked at my home page and it said that I had to submission... whoops!

I'm sure they'll get it sorted. What a clever idea ^-^

Thanks for all your comments overmy past submissions, I've pushed it into the running so wish me luck!

Wow, this is really nice!

Haha! Id buy that!

I like the new placement!!



I made some changes to mine.... v2:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28633/She_lies

Oh no! I was rejected AGAIN!!!!!!



They said I needed to do MORE work on it to improve it and that I should submitt it in the critique section (Which I have... SIX TIMES!)

WHAT DO I NEED TO DO!????

Do you think it's because I am too young to submitt it?

i think its really good, they are just too strict about it

Someone said on my blog that they might have rejected it because they thought the cattails might have been copied from clip art. would they reject it on that basis without telling me??

If that might be the case, when I submitt it should I submitt a link too, leading to a youtube video of me making a cattail. It's really easy and it takes like two minutes. Would that work?

Hahaha.

Possession of art is crazy...

hi, i was just wondering what program u used to draw this.

I like the underlying concept, but maybe push the idea a little farther. What else could deliver the baby stork? What if the guy were a bike messenger or something else that a person might do. It needs a little bit of a twist. You do have a nice illustration style tho, so keep trying!



I don't think they were worried about the cattails being copied from clip art.

I really like the idea, but something about the drawing itself looks a bit flat

Have to agree with sweet87.

Liking more the underpart than the part above

1st storks don't live in the water. the stork should be in her nest waiting for its baby. change the colors.



Say something about mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28823/illuminator

storks are a lot bigger (don't you remember?)

This IDEA is fantastic, but I don't like the MAMA storks and the lake, i think just the man and the baby in the sky is suficient to understand the IDEA. Maybe you can play with clouds or Draw a older man flyng.



Sorry my english, is horrible.

I love the idea. Great great idea haha wish I could fly :(



I'd love to hear some feedback about my own:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29924/Road_to_My_Heart

i love it!

maybe you should try some more colors for shirts!





critique mine!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29919/Peace_in_Hand

i tink sme more designs can b made,may b t sky..........

can u critique mine.....

http://www.threadless.com/critique/47355/tiger

Loving this massage. "You give, I give, equally exchange value" but i think the green is too bright.





and please advice my design as well



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46923/Smilelikeme



http://www.threadless.com/critique/46920/MonkeyNipp