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MongoMan
MongoMan on Sep 15 '08
Hi, this is my first tee design and it would be great with some feedback. Not sure about that big white space and how I could do without. Also, is it an interesting/funny enough design? Check out the link for a close up of the design.

http://www.texturehub.net/web/feable_earthling1.jpg

Thanks :)
producer
producer on Sep 15 '08
i guess i don't quite understand. is it an alien in an astranuat's suit, implying that he killed the human who had a teddy bear? it's a nice enough vector drawing, but i don't think it should need text to make it funny, and definitely release it from the box. try making the linework a light color and just put it directly on the dark shirt, it will have good contrast and eliminate the box. good start, keep it goin
MongoMan
MongoMan on Sep 16 '08
Thanks, yeah I have to loose the box I agree, will try with white linework to.

The "idea" was that the spaceman (alien) met his first "human" he thought, wich is this teaddy bear, or it could be that we need to seek comfort in a teddy... not shure, stupid idea realy, I just liked the spaceman drawing I did. Maybe I should just use that and loose everything else... hmmm :)
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