in the last slide I lightened the brown because it was showing up really dark on the model. but, yeah, what do you think? is it ready to sub or should I fix some things?

Looks good, but the browns on the bear need to be contrasted a bit more.



JDC

yeah the bear fades into either the background or itself...needs definition of the fur from itself...i like this though...its cool...the brown works well



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28352/The_Crayfish_Crush

I agree the bear blends in too much with the shirt color as is, otherwise it's great.

Make the bear a darker brown as opposed to a red brown and you'll have it looking smashing. I do like it on the brown tee more than the other.

thanks so much! I'll fix up the color on the bear, then :)

I like the slide 3 the bear is much more clear on that one, but the white on tiger stands out!

Nice illustration though!

Can you critique mine please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28359/I_Scream

if the tiger had a more cream color to it, it may fade back a bit. But it could just be because the bear is faded into the back currently. Cool idea!

I changed the color on the bear, and the white on the tiger a bit. what do you think? better?

The lions head is kinda small compared to the bear.

Very smart idea

maybe the lion needs more hair. i also kinda wish the text was on the right side. i like it, more coloRs!

I agree, that Lion needs hair!. And maybe a different shade of yellow/brown/orange or whatever it is for the fur...

thanks! I'll try giving the lion more hair and see how it looks.

there is a big empty gap below the bear, can you move the text in there?

and what would it look like without the teeth showing?



Please, critique back: http://www.threadless.com/critique/28362/Swans

bear is still about same color as tee and still lost on it. Tiger looks more realistic than tiger and bear.... i mean all the animals should be same style

than lion and bear i meant :) maybe try different animal tiger with his color and stripes looks too bright

I would lighten up the bear just a bit not to much and then I think it would be prefect!