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ninety
ninety on Sep 15 '08
I changed the color on the bear, and the white on the tiger a bit. what do you think? better?
Fujiapple
Fujiapple on Sep 16 '08
The lions head is kinda small compared to the bear.

Very smart idea
cyanidee
cyanidee on Sep 16 '08
maybe the lion needs more hair. i also kinda wish the text was on the right side. i like it, more coloRs!
MCSPU
MCSPU on Sep 16 '08
I agree, that Lion needs hair!. And maybe a different shade of yellow/brown/orange or whatever it is for the fur...
ninety
ninety on Sep 16 '08
thanks! I'll try giving the lion more hair and see how it looks.
Wondertwig
Wondertwig on Sep 16 '08
there is a big empty gap below the bear, can you move the text in there?

and what would it look like without the teeth showing?



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yaroslava
yaroslava on Sep 16 '08
bear is still about same color as tee and still lost on it. Tiger looks more realistic than tiger and bear.... i mean all the animals should be same style
yaroslava
yaroslava on Sep 16 '08
than lion and bear i meant :) maybe try different animal tiger with his color and stripes looks too bright
WindmillCookie
WindmillCookie on Sep 16 '08
I would lighten up the bear just a bit not to much and then I think it would be prefect!
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