A random browsing of the room inspired this playfully morbid bit.

The inversion of the words "fun" and "with" doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the design. Perhaps if you made those words seem cloth-like, and then 'stapled' them to the shirt it would make more sense. The face is a little too cartoony in my opinion, but that is a bit more subjective.

Cool!!

Change the placement, like more to the middle of the shirt!!



Could give me some feedback, please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28497/GHOSTS_NOW_ATTACK

I like the idea here, but it seems too cartoon'ish. Maybe add some shading to the yellow face?



Thanks for your input on mine. I made some changes.

it's so nice but maybe u can put the face in the middle ..... but i like it