This would cover almost the whole shirt. I've been in a mess over colours-these probably won't be the final ones. It looks good on a pale shirt too.



anyway- crit away!

make some of the books glow in the dark to find a hidden image or message



that'd be cool, trust me

it would be good if there were some unexpected things between the books. not sure what though. nice idea.

its a little bit like this.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/143986/Your_Own_Library

I had seen that shirt when I was searching to see if anyone had had a similar idea- I think the hand drawn-ness, figure, and close togetherness of all the books sets it apart enough- its a completely different style and take on it.



Love the glow in the dark idea- and the things hiding idea-I'll see what I can think off...

i agree it is different enough, just thought you might want to see it.

will the ladder go off the bottom of the shirt.

also his left leg looks a little thin.

ivejustquitsmoking :

"make some of the books glow in the dark to find a hidden image or message".

YES YES YES

this would definetly be cool lookign when it wraps around the whole shirt and i liek the current colors, which woudl defiently go well with some glow int eh darks jsut for fun or soemthing



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/28280/hidden_picture

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perhaps make the book real crazy colors? or a couple here or there that are different



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i like the simplicity so dont add anymore except something in glow in the dark

I watching how this will come out :)

nice, i like this, i think like ivejustquitsmoking said, i will be very cool to make some of the books glow!

Some glow in the dark inks? Faces peeking out between books.



Critques welcome:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28520/Eat_Your_Fruits_amp_Veggies

im so busy at the moment- haven't got round to doing the next version yet. Keep an eye out- hopefully in the next few days...

it seems ordinary.ı hope other version will be better

i'm bothered by the guys arm

I would LOVE glow-in-the-dark titles!

I agree that the guy's forearm is a little bit too long.



Marsupial in my Pocket!

I'm still watching this

placement?



The Way The Sun Hits Her

oh yeah, Id completely forgotten about this

Ok, Ill put some work into it...

nice, my wife would love this one! does the ladder get taller, or are the books above just out of reach entirely? just thought i'd ask.

haha im sure the ladder gets taller..!! i love it! its brilliantly done... and the colours are spot on .... i have a friend thats obsessed with librarians..... i would get this shirt for him ....



the glow in the dark idea is cool ... but not necessary...



:)



if u have a sec, i'd love to hear what u think of mine..



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30061/Mousing_Around

Finally, the new idea!!

so this is a preview of it in the dark, with a giant glowing BOOK MONSTER!

I redrew the little librarian too, you can just see him underneath.

thats really cool.

I like it, nice concept as well.



Critique mine plz.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30578/Optical_Illusions

Should I add a speech bubble like 'RAR' 'BOO' or something from book monster?

anymore comments? this one has been a long time in the making.

I don't think there should be a speech bubble. I really really like this. And I want one. I definitely don't see anything that needs fixed.

This is def good! I think it's done. Just work on the presentation. Make a Flash while where you can switch between the design, the design in the dark, the placement and maybe on a model too?



I really like this. You've developped your idea really well to a prof design.

Could you crit mine too?



The Wish Machine



That's where the clouds come from



The evil Dino

yeah, i agree. I dont think a speach bubble is needed.

I would say its ready.

great, it might take me a few days to put into flash- I dont have it at home. Unless a presentation wizz can do it for me if I supply the images....?

It doesn't look like it's missing anything, I think it's ready to go

I think... you need a lighter color base to put the GID ink on.. otherwise it wont be that bright..? Not sure tho, no expert

mmm, why would that happen? maybe I can find out for sure somewhere...

link

I guess it'll still work, but here's a guide of sort

Thanks for that- very useful. I might try it all on a pale gray too.

ha thats actually quite funny

if you want to add a speech bubble maybe you should try and think of something you can pun that's literary. (does that even make sense?)



something lame like "BOOOO-KS!" but maybe not that lame.

Thats a good idea- I'll have a think.

(maybe a reference to a popular horror novel too?)

in my search for a nice quote/ something clever for the book monster to say, I've stumbled on the new title for this-

Where there is no imagination, there is no horror

(sir Arthur Conan Doyle)

still considering whether the monster should be saying something....

"you'll never crease my pages again!"



http://www.threadless.com/critique/30311/You_Are_What_You_Eat

ha, thats pretty good.

god i love this check out mine Here

Threadless love horror- YES! This is definately getting entered.

Boooooks!

whos doing the dont submits? give me some feedback too please?

cool not bad would say work on the gosht more maybe hollow eyes

but cool good luck

crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30940/micro_pandas

^that's the back of the monster. So, you shouldn't be able to see the eyes.

he looks like a tree to me. not sure wat you can do to make it more monster-like but something needs to happen

Its not a great preview, but since I don't have flash...



This will probably be what I submit, I couldn't think of anything good for the monster to say- maybe its more ominous that he is silent?



I think I will submit this tonight, and post the larger images as links.

He doesn't have to say anything, he's already made of words *rimshot*. But really, I like it. Are you going to include that quote?

haha. the quote isnt part of the design, but I suppose it could be...

This is cool. I have a friend who would totally wear this shirt :)



Please critique mine too :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/46781/AHHHHHHH