This came about after a run in with a rather demanding 8 year old. Then I thought, hey, sometimes I want to be a demanding 8 year old.

Very nice. I don't like the black circle though. Maybe find another color or remove the background color in the bubble altogether? good luck with your sub.

Thanks, for the comment. I'll check it out.

I agree the with the black circle thing, also is there any way you could make it look more of a sentence structure, right now it looks like a list which is making it difficult to read



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Thanks for the comments. I'm working on the circle as for readability I am looking at using a different typeface. Futura, while a personal fav, I think is contributing to the problem especially when presented in all caps. Again, thanks for the feedback.

maybe try a hand drawn font. also agree the speach bubble looks awful.

I would convey more emotion in your text. I can see the guy saying it in my head and it doesn't look that clean and repetitive. Write it like you would say it with varying intensity and line breaks where he would pause instead of in the middle.



His shadow looks a bit weird in front, probably because of the triangle junction on the figure.

Major rework here. Thanks for all the great comments. Gave the type some emotional punch using a hand drawn styled font and reworked the sentence structure for flow. Did away with the bubble around the type that many of you found distracting. The little devil was refined a bit with some additional shading. All in all your comments were dead on. As for the photo, I think the little devil would make a great hand puppet for Bob.

This one is great, I really like the devil and text is major improvement of the first one....I'd definitly buy this one.



Could you have a look at my designs please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28374/Skelington_Headless

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28276/Skellington

Awesome!!! Not something I would wear (religious thing), but there is definitely a market on this site for your idea.

I say submit it!



Please, critique my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/28362/Swans

Definitely has a lot of character now. Submit!