Fresh out of the sketch book. See what ya think. I might add some more monsters later.

Hello =)



Well right now there really isn't much to crit, just take it further.



The monster is cute in an ugly cute way ;P



Please vote for The Noble Gases!

open to suggestions.

love this charactor - but he needs to be doing something

monster mash would be a more appropriate title

JUST THROWING AROUND AN IDEA. Comments please

difficult to read ... cool idea... maybe a little more dull colored shirt would help.

this is kinda scary and cute at the same time. I like.

"It was a graveyard smash!" Cool. You might need to work on the placement of the masher - it would fall immediately below the neck line and that doesn't always fly with Threadless critics.



Please Reciprocate: Seaside

Great idea! I just think the masher and the monster blend together too much. I looked at this one several times before I realized what was actually happening. Separate the colours a bit and I think you have a great design.



Mind Reciprocating?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/29014/Dreaming_of_Red

Cool idea, but is there any way you could make the masher more interesting? It's just two lines running up most of the shirt...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28933/The_Abstract

It is pretty good. I think you need to make the words more easier to read... And I think the colours are a bit boring, maybe some brighter ones would look better.



Anyway, keep going with it, I think the monster is cute!

Do you mind checking out mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29083/Seahorse_Horse

just a few changes. More to come in two minutes. thanks for the feed back.

What do you think about the colours?

like the idea realy nice concept But colours are are bit too bright for me also dog /cold do woth more detail the hairs just look scragelly but good idea

check out minehttp://www.threadless.com/critique/29600/rawr#v5

cool concept and colours.... but i would have the stuff coming out the masher just be squiggles rather than text....



great drawing :)



please comment and vote on mine:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/180760/Mother_Nature