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csharron
   csharron on Sep 10 '08
Please let me know what you guys think about the colors, etc. Any comments are much appreciated.
oddlead
oddlead on Sep 10 '08
Cute! Is that a lighter he's holding? Hard to tell from this distance. I like it on the brown shirt.
Makesfive
Makesfive on Sep 10 '08
Looks fun. Love the brown, like the orange. Looks like the colors are bleeding out of the linework a bit?
Syncos
Syncos on Sep 10 '08
this would be a wicked design with uv ink. the burn + the fire shows up in sunlight. that would be pro.
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AwesomeGirl86
AwesomeGirl86 on Aug 21 '09
I like the brown & the yellow shirts.

I know the marshmellow is th main focus of the design, but maybe if you could define the lighter a litter bit more. Maybe give it a light gray color or something.



Anways, can you critique my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/51303/iCare
Octopornopus
Octopornopus on Aug 21 '09
That'll teach those Chinese marshmallows to oppress him!

I like it, the sad drippy marshmallow is depressing, but then I get a s'more out of it, so it makes me happy.



Mind giving me some crit? Rabbi'd Dawg
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