Bonjour

I wasn't sure about having it in English- but I like french.

Comments?

I think its awesome, i think id wear it too.

Good, but it needs work :P

nah i like it in french defo. its awesome. id buy it!

Keep it in french!

Where does the cord goes?

the swirls needs some touch up

Keep up the good work

i quite like the idea. its a little hard to read the 'r' in my opinion. but other wise i think its almost ready for submission.



If you have time check mine out. please and thankyou :)



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Ah! Thats Se manific! I love it!

To be honest I'd fix the "r" because I thought it said Bon Jove until I noticed the comments. Other than that I think it's really cool, but I'm not sure if I'd personally wear it.

sorry, that messed up.



I dont have a scanner at the moment so I've just reworked the original picture a bit, see what epople think. The next version is on its way, with improved J, U and R and a cord that trails off to the corner of the shirt.

bump

i dont like the added pattern but the orange looks cool.