i know there was already a really cool narwhal submission recently, but I had this idea sitting in my moleskin and want to empty it.

yes, this is awsome, would this be centerd on a shirt?

yeah. right now i'm just trying to crack out the details though.

did you do the polar bear fencing as well?

no, where is that?

Needs more of a fencing stance, like polar bear fencing

cool idea! so... how many WIPs you have there?

hmm... i thought that was a fencing stance.



and... ivejustquit: iunno. 5? :D

Like the idea, i think the ice outlines can be removed

yeah or maybe just less of the outlines.

like half. thank you.

i like this alot.

yeah i agree.. a little less on the ice outlines. but all in all its looking pretty nice.



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new version coming up soon.

yeah this is cool! but your design might not get noticed because of the prev narwhal design. but this is definitely sweet!



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yeah, thats what i was worryin' about. I'll have to add some other elements... like a unicorn or somethin.

The narwhal's tail looks either too small or too close to his body.

Looks good. Yeah, less lines on the ice plus maybe you can vary the thickness of the lines there. Overall, it's pretty cool now.



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