What indeed classifies someone as being a bird lover? Does it mean they should hang out scantily clad in the wild underbrush, while gifting small sentiments of affection as pre-flight good luck charms? One can only hope.

Interesting! I don't know that the brown across the bottom is necessary, and I'd like to see it on a color shirt.

Looks good, though it seems as the slin could use a littlwe touch - it looks incomplete cause everything else tas texture.



look my

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28035/Caffinemaniac

Beautiful illustration, not so keen on the outline around the figure or the brown around the bottom though.

WoW! awesome!



you remenber my space cow? please vote my (be indulgent lol)



http://www.threadless.com/submission/177403/space_cow/showmore,designs



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THANK YOU!!!

looks gorgeous... but it seems like the eyes are placed a bit too low on the girl's face...



crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28071/draw_doodling

I'd say lose the ground or make it less boxy. It's really flat compared to the rest of your wonderful illustration. I agree on the skin.

I totally voted for your space cow today! I gave it a 5$...Good Luck!

looks awesome :), not too crazy about the "ground line" though

hey, thanks for your crit; i'll try your suggestion.



but now to your one: nice, mucha-esque design! i like it very much. good shapedesign and colors. but a few things to crit (excuse my perhaps not so perfect english):



i think the ground is unnecessary; i would like to see it without. perhaps the birds on the back also to much..?



the lower body of the girl, i mean the legs and the drapery need work; the drapery feels stiff and i think it could be more "elegant" with more flowing, curvy lines (..more mucha?).



something's not right with her legs; she doesn't seem to really sit on the ground. perhaps you can just fix that by lowering them..?



and lastly, perhaps you could put some texture work on the flying birds, like you did with the ones more close to the flowers..?



uh, i wrote much... :P anyway, that was everything which came to my mind.

work a bit on it and then good luck with the submission, i think it has a high potential to get made :)

Groovy design, I like it. Few suggestions though. Im not sure I like the outline around the girl. Although the brown ground looks ok on the design, when on a tshirt, it doesn't look so good. The green blanket around the girl could be a bit more supple, it looks a bit stiff and angular atm. Good work!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28046/Laughing_Earth