any suggestions?

I like the drawing style - very hip. However, I don't get the special meaning behind a bat ripping off the victims arm. If it were gory, maybe I'd appreciate it more.

Please reciprocate: Pirates were the First Gangstas

this is awesome! but i do suggest you make the "blood" trail cleaner. and try using a dark grey color istead of black...

Very funny, man! Hehe, it's just pure nonsense and that's why it works well (it doesn't always do). Good work.

Check out my designs too:
Chick magnet
Geek chick

hahahaha!
really random.
but very cute, in a way.
i like it.
come to think of it, i would porbably wear smth like this.

need critique on mine too, if you have time to spare.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

dont go with the white bkround !!

I agree with most of the previous comments. Funny Concept. Lose the plain white background. Clean up the blood trail. Why is it an S? It would be funny to see it even spell something in cursive. Also on the guy I either want to see shirt sleeves or nipples. If there is a shirt on him. Should it say something? I dunno, something to consider.

love the style yet nto sure botu size its too much maybe add more bats, in back ground or special glow ink,, hmm but anyway make it smaller to the bottom as it is
crit me
http://www.threadless.com/critique/27662/rock_band

umm... this looks good now, but if you put more elements then it might look too much. This sorta type of design also thrives in space.

and not all shirts need words on 'em. It's the "blood" trail that really bothers me. it should be cleaner. the amount is fine. the drops shape is what i don't like.