I'm not sure if this design needs anymore color, or if the entire color scheme should change. Any suggestions?

Wow the artwork is incredible! I know it may be hard to implement my suggestion, but I'll give a go anyways: the face of the boy riding the tiger looks fairly nonchalant for seeing "danger ahead" - maybe you could rework that a little bit. I do like the speech bubble and the color scheme is really pleasing to the eye. This is definitely sub material as is (:



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/27918/Reef_Safari



it is in need of some good TLC and I could really use your input!

I like it. Feels like a childrens book cover or something. I'm trying to decide whether I agree with Marrgalo. The tiger looks appropriately wary, so maybe the kid doesn't have to...

I enjoy the colors but agree with the kids face... it should look more !!!!! maybe? Actually, I think a slight expression on his face would go a long way, he doesn't need to look shocked but maybe just a little surprised or concerned. Would it still be do-able in a light blue? I like the idea of the red and orange contrasting with a pale blue or other color. You should have stayed up later last night working on it. ;)

yea.......i agree with more !!!!! on the boys face and it would look killer on a light blue shirt. i also think it would be cool to see the tiger be a white tiger but its not necessary, haha



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I thought maybe the "danger" was just far off enough in the distance to where the boy didn't need to freak out yet. BUT, he probably should have more an expression. Appreciate the input :)

One thing I like about the current shirt color is how the design can fade into it, especially on the tiger. Very cool illustration.



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When are you gonna submit this, son???

I don't get the whole simplified speech bubble thing, but what do I know? I do like the illustration a great deal. Great action lines! I do wonder what's ahead, but I suppose it's better not to know.



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i say, leave the expression on the boy's face... it's fine... and your design is awesome...

I think the expression on the boy's face is just right for the design, but I guess the problem is that it doesn't quite match up with the ! in the speech bubble. It might even work without the speech bubble at all. Or maybe make the boy's eyebrows more downturned and fierce looking.



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chick magnet

sub it

but I don't think you need the speech bubble

sub! sub! sub!

Definately. Submit it.



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/27835/Impenetrable

took we about 5 seconds to realize this was calvin and hobbes xD and wow! I really like how you made it all realistic. Well done, the artwork is great.





need critique on mine too, if you have time to spare.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

WOW the tiger (speechless)

very tight..love the color..and to me the boy looks kinda like nonchalant but in a bad ass kinda way...would look great on a cream colored shirt



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/27999/brain_Stormin

please

beautifull situation

This is amazing. I tend to agree with KDV but awesome!