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v1 Finish Your Drawings, current version








Work in progress by:
The Dot
on Sep 05 '08
The Results
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The Dot
The Dot on Sep 05 '08
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Fujiapple
Fujiapple on Sep 05 '08
Haha like the legs tied up behind.





Crit me please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27774/Zebra_eye_test
heroben
heroben on Sep 05 '08
Not sure about the pencils. But I have no input as to go about changing it either.





http://www.threadless.com/critique/27752/I_Heart_Starfish
123 days later
il-Mattu
il-Mattu on Jan 06 '09
The tear drop... try making it bolder...



the rest i love the concept and the style ;)
183 days later
drawingnut
drawingnut on Jul 08 '09
This is cool and I agree with il-Mattu you should definitely make the tear drop bolder :)
foreverleanna
foreverleanna on Jul 08 '09
hahah i like the legs too.

I think you can submit if you want now.

nice :)



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Taste the Rainbow
16 days later
sheaman
sheaman on Jul 25 '09
I really like the wraparound design! I like the drawing a lot. I would personally place the bird a little more to the left side. Really nice work though, I'm excited to see more!



If you could please comment and vote on my recent sub, that'd be awesome! http://www.threadless.com/submission/222847/Keyboards
stab_letter_b
stab_letter_b on Jul 25 '09
nice
6 days later
taylatay
taylatay on Jul 31 '09
What if the bird looked more shaded in with colored pencil compared to...the dots (or maybe that's a trademark?)



I don't know...it looks good how it is but *shrugs*



plus Mildew's critique.



yea...keep the great designs coming!
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