I'm hoping to fine tune a lot of the design details so I'm looking for any feedback at this time.

I think that's awesome as it is! I hope it gets printed! I don't know really if you need to fine tune anything, it looks good to me. I like it on the green especially.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/27846/Here_comes_trouble

I love how the two normal houses seem to have faces.

How about a grey-black&white color option?



Can you score and comment my design?

Awesome design! Looks pretty good as it is. Maybe you could play a bit more with the other two houses and try to make it look like they are really looking at their strange neighbor. I don't know, maybe the middle house could exhibit some alien features as well? :)



I'd appreciate a look at my design too:

Geek Chick

I like it.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/27752/I_Heart_Starfish

love it!

maybe use a brighter colour to make it pop?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/27843/Batman

"I don't know, maybe the middle house could exhibit some alien features as well?" The fact that it has 3 window eyes and is on its side isn't enough. ;) Not sure what else I could add to the house part without over doing it. I'm thinking I need to make better tress and work on the background a bit.

Haha - nice. I like the muted tones, but I think it would be nice to see something popping. Perhaps the UFO in a futuristic silver foil if you could bear it?

yeah, I'm trying to figure out the best 8 colors to use to make this have the best contrast but still feel right. I like the idea of using a foil.

I might try to update this later tonight, so any more feedback could still make it into version 2.

Added some more details for the fun of it and changed the UFO to a Silver Foil like fatheed suggested.

Cool crop circles! Submit it.

I like it on green...and yes, the crop circle on the lawn made me laugh. I agree... submit this.



drop on by and give me a crit:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27877/Internet_Prawn

I'd like to improve the mountain behind it. Any suggestions?

i think it would be better with no ufo. its not as obvious but i dont think it needs to be.

Make it a pointing mountain landscape.



like this: ^^^^^^^^

lol. this shirt makes me laugh.

that girl is cute who is she? :p



the greatest part of it is that the houses are looking at the one in the middle.



nice man... do improve the mountain...

Cool concept and execution.



I like the ufo, but it is rather obvious. As cool as shiny foil is, maybe just a silhouette in the hill color?



Your mountain probably just needs more little ridges.

oh much improved. I dig it, and think it is ready to submit.

v4 = glitch.

Ok, I feel like I improved the mountains. I made a Black and Grey option now shown on a guy model and I cleaned up a few things on the houses that were bugging me. I kept the foil because I really like how it works. How's it look?

oh and version 3 is the same as version 5 and version 4 was a glitch because I didn't think version 3 went through. So ignore those 2 versions.

Mmmm when I looked your first version I really liked the UFO without the foil. I think it makes the shirt look a little tacky and that's definitely not the way I envision your design. It has a really cute, clever vibe! Just not feeling that tinfoil (on the green, mostly)



Please have a look at my design, it really needs some help:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27918/Reef_Safari



Thank you!

nice work!

the trees and the car on the right side could use some work

I just don't like the color for the spaceship...

good feed back. I'm going to work on the cars and trees now. I'm still torn by the use of the foil for the UFO, I kind of like it but I understand why it might be over the top for this design.

Just keeps getting better ^-^



Maybe limit the foil on the UFO and/or add it to the houses too? Your mountain tops could use a little variation on the top of the white caps instead of the same line width.

New cars, removed the foil from the green version but left it optional on the b lack option, and fixed a few other things.

the green one is awesome... the black is boring... great design though...

submit!

submit.

not eally a shirt i would buy, it's too plain for me...but it's really nicely illustrated, and smart. submittt.



need critique on mine too, if you have time to spare.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

Perfect as is. I'd wear it.

nice touch with the windows... sub it

It's clean, but I think you could make it better. It could be a lot funnier than it is.

i think itd be better if the house was more like a trapdoor and less like a piece of lego on its side. i mean, i think its a great idea, its just that the house is kinda weird looking like that to me.

Some great touch's since the first crit. Love the window 'eyes' and the lawn/yard. Subiiiitt!

I think I'll submit this version. Thanks for all the help.

Submitted.