Takes me back to the days of building fully functional forts with household furniture. Man, last tuesday was a good day.



I'm pretty sure about the design, but what do you think of the colors and placement?

I dont like the placement, but it's just because i like central neat placement.

For about the colours, i thinkthey're ok, but it's not ok the lineart (IMHO).



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Reminds me of those good old days. Great idea.

Maybe you can try some more vibrant colours ?

Yeah I think I will, Thanks

Just changed the colours. what do people think?

All the rest a great, but the sheets and pillows (in my opinion) can still be improved on.

this is a really cool idea i used to do that all the time, what would it's placment be on a shirt though?



critique my design it's over here

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27754/Monkeys_In_A_BArrel

I love the idea! Aww, the good ol days of forts in the living room.

I think this is great. I could see this in a lower corner of the shirt kinda medium sized.

nice concept. could you add some shading lines to the drawing to add to the depth of the design. Simple hatch lines would work.

Thanks for the suggestion- ill give it a go. Version Three coming soon....

nice idea- but i wish the person inside would look less like a monster and more like a kid (maybe more that one?)...

New drawing, new colours. Please everyone-what do you think?

I like these colors. I think your flag is a bit big on the loose end for the perspective. Maybe add a little more of that hatching towards the top (pole, flag, hat, swivel leg, etc.). It ties the drawing together well.

i like the old school, sesame street approach to illustrating. This might actually have a chance when you submit it. I agree with bobuchan about adding a little of the hatching on the pole.



I'd appreciate it if you'd look at Geek chick or Chick magnet. Thanks!

haha i like the idea and the guys cheesey grin, the flag looks like it doesnt have as much detail as the rest of the stuff tho?

Ok, I'll change the pole+flag, and I forgot to put in the extra chair on tit's side so that too. Thanks for the help.

yeah now the colours good

Ok, so improved hat stand+flag, and the extra chair in the corner. Thoughts?

works, maby fix the smile it doesnt seem to match sweet tho !

it's a good illustration, but i dont understand it :S

maybe a person/kid sitting in the mouth of the "fortress" holding a flag/sword/gun type thing?

Great improvement since V1.Keep up the good work. I think you can submit this already.

Add a shirt so we can visualise how it will look + comment on the placement.

Couldn't think what to change- but here is a man to show you the placement.



What should I do now??

This looks like it's almost ready. The smiley face is a quite Cheshire cat-like, which creeps me out a little. Maybe the person or child inside could be peeking out a little more...possibly over one of the cushions. It looks pretty good on that navy blue.

OMGAH! YESSS!

very very very sick!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28144/quot_The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her_quot

you lose some of your colors on that navy shirt, perhaps a lighter shirt in a medium tone. Burgundy or Brown.

i think its just about ready.

i like the colours. perhaps experiment a little further with those before you submit to make sure you've chosen the right ones.

i would wear it.

oh and the face creeps me out. i don't know if thats a good thing. make it look a little more like a kid and less like my pet monster

ha

The face is like Cheshire Cat.

Erm i think im the only person that doesnt know what the toot* is Chehire Cat.

Cheshire Cat is from Alice in Wonderland. He has the ability to disappear parts of his body, leaving often only his grin.



I do like this version. I like it on the navy, but you might tweak the coloring. the dark blue in your drawing could use a little more contrast from the shirt.

I really like it, looks finished to me. Only concern I have is that the placement might be kind of bad on a girl's shirt.

Added some texture to the background, changed the colours a bit and sorted the smile-its gone! Still not really happy with this though...



I might go back and start over with a new drawing.



What do you all think?

haha, I really like it! I'm personally a fan of higher placements, but it looks awesome on the photo.

I dont know about the background texture, it looks like its falling.

Also, i would prefer it with a mouth, now the kid looks like he is scared.

Adorable, I've always loved this sort of artwork, it feels very real if you know what I mean.

I would leave all as is and submit. SSeriously.

wow great colors!



please critique mine: Choose your Weapon

bring back the smile!

Oh,I'd prefer the version 5!Without the line on background and with the smile.I agree that really should bring back the smile :) and it will be ready for submission!





Can you critique mine please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28903/what_do_you_mean_quot_your_cat_is_not_normal_quot