I enjoy drawing about the relationships between people and all sorts of critters. The subject matter can be real or theoretical, but there's usually always a hint of cynicism. This particular piece is dedicated to all of you who are as fascinated with evolution and comparative anatomy as I am!

I really like it, and I like the concept. The wings look a bit out of place style-wise to me...A more hand-drawn look like the rest might help them blend in, even if you don't do the black outlines. Whether or not you decide to change that, I say submit

i like the style and the placement of this design, but i agree the wings are very different in comparison to the outlines figures. i think you should either make the outlines of the skeleton and the winged figure lighter or do what the person above suggested.

I might not like the design by itself but I sure do like the way it turned out on the model. So I think that it would make great shirt. My opinion is that you should..submit!



Critique mine if you have a chance. thx



http://www.threadless.com/critique/27668/Sound_Collage

I like the placement of the Design but i think that the wings could use like a thin outline that is hand drawn or something...



I love the Orangutan Eagle Creature though its great!

your composition solution with placement is king.

I think it's solid.

Haha. great juxtaposition. This does make for a nice shirt. As an image it looks wierd with texture only on the wings and nothing else. But on the shirt it seems to work. The wings are doing wierd things with his shoulders. I think playing with placement would help.

nice drawing, maybe correct placement. then i'll buy it!

I agree with what has been said about placement and the wings.



I love your sketchy style, always great to see something drawn by hand.

Looks great! My only questions is with the orangutan (?)'s arms - are they meant to look more human than ape-like??



Great stuff ;)



Critique mine? The Sky is Yours

Thanks for everyone's comments! So....I've redrawn the wings to match the rest of the style, and shrank the placement a bit. Other thoughts?

This is figgen AWESOME!! I'd totally wear it, the placement is great the illustration is great, try some different tee colours? But other than that I'd submit. Well done.



I'd love some feedback on my second design if you have time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27704/My_brain_is_fried

awesome, I think this revision is perfect. submit!

You seem to be drawing apes on your work, fantastic! You can never have enough apes and monkeys...and this is beautifully oscure.

*obscure

I love how you resolved this. It's so much more unified. I'm still not sure about the shoulders. If you had it smaller, would it work better?



Please crit my new monkey

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27703/The_Rocketeer

So immensely awesome! This one I'd actually buy.

FLYING APES AND SKELETONS!!