Should i change the colour ?



Pls comment!

Yeah i think that you should change the colour of the background and also give a tail to the Zebra.



But other than that nice concept!...

Roger that

Thanks Schmeme

haha so cute!! but why doesnt he have stripes on his face? are zebra faces all white? i agree he should have a tail too... otherwise LOVE it! i woudl absolutely wear it, and i actually like the blue background. id be interested to see it on diff colors however.



please critique me if you get a chance! Thanks!

Thanks for the crit

I will

1) add a tail

2) change the colour

3)add stripes on the face

yes! awesome! but agree with what others have said



crit mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27497/Ocean_Adventure#lastcomment

I will upload a new version soon!

why does the picture gets out of proportion when i upload the new version?



Pls help

Oh got it

Pls crit



Added

1) A tail

2) stripes on face

3) changed background colour

Should i colour the stool or leave it as it is now ?

the stool is ok,

need more action ,

try think what u will pose when has eye test.

but the idea is cool.

like it~~

is he going to wear glasses?

not if he passes this eye test, lol

Nice work but...what's the message? I don't know, but maybe I'm the only one that doesn't get it right now. Ahehe...



Check out my design as well?

Geek Chick

Maybe i should add a poacher into the eye chart.



comments ?

I like this one! don't think it need changes

Which version is better V2 or V3

In V3 I changed the tiger for a poacher.



Please rate. Thanks

I think V3 is a little more dynamic with the hunter on the top, which makes it more comedic.



P.S.- not sure the arm should be over its eye, maybe more of a young/ innocent pose w/ the shoulders slouches/ eyes wide.



It's pretty good though.

SO CUTE !



if you have time, please check out my critique ^^



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

Ok i will keep the hunter.



But innocent pose and wide eyes I've got to try out.

This is my first time making my own animal cartoon character, got to do some research on zebras.



Thanks

This version is really good))



Please see mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27741/No_music_no_life

I like the eye covering action going on, it fits in with the whole eye test thing. i think its awesome- submit.



Crit me if you can...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27835/Impenetrable

Love the V3 -- Awesome work!

Thanks guys, should I submit this ?

Go for it

Erm for whoever that says 'dont submit' can I know why please

yes, i liek the hunter all liek wow woah ahh i see it, thats good



critique mine if theres a shine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27754/Monkeys_In_A_BArrel

haha! even better than the other!

Thanks for your comment!

Your V3 is really good maybe you should put a decor with more details?

yeah i agree with more details.

Maybe a side table at the corner ?

Aw i have my exams for the rest of this month, so please bear with me I will post the Final Version (with a tree stump table) a.s.a.p.



Please continue commenting.Thanks.



Fujiapple

I tried out the tree stump ideas didnt work out so good.

So im posting this version for now.

Wish me luck

With placement.

Also it matches almost all colours expecially darker ones.

Is the placement alright ?

i think the zebra would have looked better a little more centered. Also...why is he in an eye exam and has no eyes? is that the joke? i don't think i get it nor will anyone.

Erm the eyes are right there, see the thingy at the left of the hand.

I will try to get it centered + make the eyes more obvious.



Thanks clavinglavin

Perhaps another zebra in the chart somewhere...instead of the swordfish? I you make the eye too obvious, it wont look like it's hand is covering it. Placement looks good.

Please crit me

Ok I'll get gid of that fish since a fish doesnt relate to a zebra

Keep the eye as is- its obvious whats going on.

Yay good to know people understand the drawing.

I gave you a "Submit This". This is a great shirt. I wouldn't change anything!!



Thanks for your input on mine. I made some changes.

It's ready to go, I think. I like it best on green, of the colors you showed.



Critique mine?

submit! i love the pink and purple.... i dont tihnk theres anything left to change...



would love to hear ur opinion on mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28873/The_Buddha_amp_the_Blossom



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28553/Mother_Nature

Haha! I really like this. Nice improvements, I say submit!

green is beast. after you change the fishy, submit!

duh. I scored this one already.. go out there and vote you guys

yeap this was my first design gotten 2.43

thanks all for voting

haha...this is superb. i think the poacher at the top is hecka tight.