Just another thought. If I could have some feed back about the idea and colours that would be dandy.

I think its a nice idea overall. Maybe you might want to try a desert scenery in the background or something of the sort? and it would be nice if the bird was working on a road. To me, the bird looks a bit too relaxed and content to be in jail. Hope that helps



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/27668/Sound_Collage

^ I meant dessert scenery, not desert :P

ignore that last post. i thought i spelled it wrong

he has an ear?? did it look too empty in that blank space or something?

some barbed chicken wire in background might be funny, nice sketch

Thanks for the comment I will take them into consideration. The ear was a funny/ quirky idea may not have worked.

Just toying with the vector work. Comments would be nice thanks.

where're his hands? or wings? looks like he hasn't any

funnily enough I think i liked your original better.

The human ear looks a bit freaky. Nice idea on the phrase, but think it might be funnier if it was just a chicken, rather than a chicken-human mixture?



Can you feedback on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29287/12_Bar

http://www.threadless.com/critique/29330/Afternoon_In_Paris

I think the original is better but with the egg



vote and comment on mine please