I think similar concepts have probably been done in the past, but i hope you like my version more.

hope you like it.

bump!

Wow so much details, must hae taken you some time.

worked on it over a couple of days. not sure about the colours, too muted, not muted enough?

Looks great. I like the colors as is, and on that light blue. I'm not sure it will work on all those tee colors, tho.

sorry they're not the tee colours, but the 8 colours that make up the design.

Wow, I like this a lot! Colors are great, the drawing too. The only thing, that I don`t like that much is the guy`s mouth - it looks eek :D But this definitly looks like a future-favorite-shirt of mine :)

Awesome! I think you can reduce some colors of those fishes in the basket, it can be look much simple and better.

teeth are suppose to be eek, i like eeeek. he's a grotty old fisherman lol.

cheers for the feedback, i'll have a think about changing the fish.

There's a lot going on. But like Wa5hwa5h said it, I don't think the colors will work in all tees. Prove me wrong ;)

read the posts before commenting, those are the eight colours that make up the design, not the tee colours.

i have already said that.



"sorry they're not the tee colours, but the 8 colours that make up the design."

*teeth are suppose to be eek, i like eeeek. he's a grotty old fisherman lol.*



lol, alrighty then :)

haah yea i like the teeth asnd the tenticle thing



critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27536/Sea_Gaurd

don't forget to click the

submit this/needs work/don't submit

cheers

SUBMIT!

i like this,

the tongue could use a few more lines, to make it more connected to the inside of the mouth, imo







and also, i would do something other then paint dots for teh background, that's used a lot







but great ill!

any suggestion for a different background, can you use fades on threadless?

bump!

i think u cant add anything more submit itss awesoome creativity meet style!! i lvoe it on baay blue good luck1!!!

crit mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27516/popcorn

hey all. I have three images of this i want to show -the image, on a tee and as a print. i don't have flash so i can't make a cool animated preview. but i can make animated gif. thing is i can't get the size down to 250kb without loosing loads of quality. any ideas?

Submit this badboy. You're going to get a hell of an awesome score.



I would just put it all on one image. Have the detail and show it on the tee small. I wouldn't even worry about showing it on a print since it's the same as just showing the design.

Also, I suggest not showing the colors you use in the design, because clearly some people are idiots.

few changes to the background.

here's a better quality version of the design.

click here

really good artwork!

Pretty cool artwork. I'd think it would look really good on a white tee with a feather effect around the whole drawing.



Critique mine, please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27387/Underbelly#v2

feather effect, really! sound horrid.

they are a really ugly teeth!!

Not really a feathering effect, but maybe a fade. I'm just saying if the blue background doesn't perfectly match the blue shirt it will look off.

fun!!!

the blue background is the blue shirt. the blue bits are just where i haven't drawn anything, they wouldn't print anything there.

Gotcha. Submit it!

good work! what program do you use? i would def buy this...

It's hand drawn and then coloured in photoshop.

I really like it, and I know the gums are supposed to look redneckish, but maybe give the gums a different color from the skin somehow, I definitely like the style though

i just looked at your 8 colors, use the red tint one maybe

i'd like to but i've run out of colours, i'll have a play though.

but the red is part of your 8 isnt it? unless thats the lip color i have terrible eyes without my glasses haha

there is a pink, but its the colour of the lips, i could do them the same.

or the brown of the wood. hmmm

Awesome, submit it!

really great work.

this totally looks like the style of stuff that threadless prints. so good luck.



take a look at mine if ya wouldn't mind.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27538/Too_Cute_to_Kill

decisions decisions

amazing.

sick man! i hope this goes up soon for a 5!

Wow, this is really out there! Fantastic work, I would submit it.

Very Gary Larson of you!



Please Reciprocate: Pirates Were the First Gangstas

Great style and attention to detail. You make good use of the space on the shirt. And I would definitely keep it blue.

Awesome! I'd say submit, the gums do look a little off but I understand the trials of limited colours. DO NOT FEATHER... I'm sorry but that would make a brilliant illustration tragic. Looks great as is.



If you have the time I'd love feedback also

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27428/There_s_a_U_shaped_hole_in_my_heart

I like it and think that its time to submit. Awesome.

This is awesome, submit!

looks awesome but i think there's too much going on, unless its on a print

looks great. submit!

crap there goes my idea. good one. better illustrated then i could have done.

cheers for the feedback everybody.

think i'll submit this in the next day or so.

So i've made a few minor changes and submitted this

here

its pending approval at the moment, but should be up soon

Thanks for all the great comments.

hope you're as kind in the real thing.

love this design, colors are perfect.



will you crit my latest?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27497/Ocean_Adventure

Cracking illustration - submit from me!



J

like this.

crit mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27761/In_the_clouds#v2

YES

this is really awesome!

- yesterday you posted on my critique a link to a website with great lettering. i deleted my critique, and i lost the link. do you want to give me the link again please? beacouse i loved the art of that website. thanks :)

hey dream sorry can't remember the name of the site, but the illustrator is called adam hayes. i found him in a book about hand drawn type called "hand job" (he he) by michael perry. check it out its great.

thanks a lot man!

Really printable. The guys face may put off some of the more squeamish voters, but it gets a thumbs up from me. Sub it.

already have, it should be up in a couple of days.

cheers for the great feedback.

could you crit me again please?

?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27497/Ocean_Adventure#lastcomment

this is now up for voting, please vote for me.

cheers

sweet

only one more day to vote on my subbed version of this.

http://www.threadless.com/submission/177339/Under_the_Sea

hope you like it.

interesting. if it can print well, it'd look nice with such rich graphics. missed the voting.....

cheers loudspeaker, shame you missed the voting. oh well.

this is definitely wow

i like the colors and the details of the design...

love the illustration - ur ready to submit....... what do u think of mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/29124/Ipod_Baby

woops wrong link.....



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28860/Masai

Sigh.

thanks for the sigh, not sure why. oh i'm a poet.

nice size. love how it covers the ts space... nice colors...

pls comment mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/28940/Head_Invaders

The sigh was for people critiquing a long-submitted design. Then trying to link-swap. I'm on your side.



I really like your illustration, by the way. I don't know if I would buy it, but I definitely appreciate it.