clever!

is that you on the left?

I love it.

A lot.

i just happens to resemble me a little bit i think. what do you think of the colors? what can i add? should i add anything?

you deserve a print

so so so so much

this is great

i'd say add some more color

but i actuallly like it as is too

oh yeah and it looks like the guy has one really big front tooth

i'd fix that

thanks crackers! i think it needs a little more color as well i am just not sure what at this point.

:0

Yeah... I think you could mix in some yellow, but it makes me smile as is.

i think it is really nice, but the noses seem a little flat? I don't know, they somehow look wrong. that's just a little detail though ;) Great design.

maybe you could try shading it with diffrent tones/shades of blue *or the colour that you decide to use*

I like it.

I agree with the tooth thing. I'm not too sure about the placement. Maybe have the guy upon a shoulder so the speech bubbles/ heart is more in the center. Just a thought.

Bump for Stump.

this is great! i hope the word placement is part of the design - that would make it even better - and its real good as is.
sub it. print it. buy it.

thanks everyone! i look at the couple of things you've mentioned and try to have a new version up this afternoon sometime!

corey9: the word placement isn't part of the design but maybe i will think about what that could mean.

You DO make good lettering.

A great lime green would add mega jazz to this already awesome illustration.

Stump bump 2 :)

One more bump before I go run errands.

:D bump for smiles!

thanks jen :D

mezo: i like the lime green idea. when i get home today i going to go to work on that straight away!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

maybe make the heart a light blue? i like it though

too much white for the speech bubbles
i'd like to see v2

The placement is a lot nicer. :)

I love this version too.

i think its an awesome design but before sending it in you might want to experiment with the colors some more.
keep that same blue background but you could change up the colors of their talk bubbles and hair
i'd use another shade of blue, pale yellow and that green

I don't know which I like best!

YAY! color

but there's still that one giant tooth the guy has

Bedtime bump for Mr. Stump.

hmm the blue eyes blonde hair white skin arian nation. i actually like it better in v2, but there is something really distracting about the speech bubble in a big blob sort of way. is it possible to soften it up w/o losing the heart? like maybe a dotted or dashed line instead of the solid outline of talk?

could you tone down the brightness of the blue shirt just a little as well please :)

thanks for the suggestions! unfortunately (or maybe fortunately) i submitted it this morning!

now that i am looking at it yet again i think you may be right rachel! i think i might like the second one better! i guess i will have to offer some color options.

Hey... shouldn't you be at work?

pretty funky!
but I'm not crazy about the green color

V2!!

yeah, v2 lookin good!

V2.

I LOVE V1 !!!!!!!

I think V2 and V3 makes it look like they have bad breath!!!!

Num 3 for sure..The faces looks great the "babel" I think needs to get polished once more..But the concept is super cool

i think the faces need some polishing, they look old and wrinkly! cool idea though.. red speaking clouds?

if you were to redo anything, i'd say to make the eyes a bit more closed and naturally happy... right now they look like they are chemically happy.

i think i like the faces this way! pretty intesting. I can say it's more a unique facial expression.