I really like this one, and think it could go far! Tell me what you think! Full size there are lots of little metallic details to watch out for!

I like it alot, you did a very good job! My only complaint would be that you don't see enough of the robot parts, I would suggests taking the shirt down just one more button--- which brings me to my next point, if it's gonna be a button down, don't you think it needs more buttons? Overall, an amazing piece of artwork!

Dang-- I forgot that last button. It got lost in the transfer. I knew I overlooked something!

Okay, I'll try bringing it down some.

heh this is clever. perhaps work on making the shirt slightly more 3-d - a shadow under the collar, maybe? And also I'd pay just a little more attention to detail concerning the buttons and button holes. they look a little simplistic right now, esp. when compared to the robot innards.

You see, I originally didn't count in the dip for the neckline. I lost a lot of parts that way.

Okay, thanks!

Yeah, I like it a lot but I'm not digging the button down or the collar

What do you suggest?

acualy coom but no needdd to make curve on the machines inside too u know? so mayke it all till the collar!

Yes, but then there's either a white band or I have to make it skintone, and that won't work unless they print about 40 gazillion different types.. ^^

ive seen a bunch of these

That's nice.

maybe you could try dropping the buttons all together and have the shirt ripping perhaps? cuz i agree the robot part is dang tight but not sold on the buttons.



throw mine a crit if you wouldn't mind

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27538/Too_Cute_to_Kill

cool i like this. yeah drop the buttons. and make it seem more "robotic" (:

Okay, so a "no" to the buttons.

bump

bump

I reckon either lose the buttons or try giving then a bit more depth.



I'm not a fan of the line going down the centre. Maybe you could try making it look like a polo shirt.