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v1 Scrumptious Detour, current version








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ahknee
ahknee on Aug 31 '08
All comments are very much enjoyed!
Piano
Piano on Aug 31 '08
The art style doesn't look so great on a white shirt. It looks to empty. Maybe try a pastel color or a light gray? I don't know. This shirt doesn't interest me too much.
Piano
Piano on Aug 31 '08
too*

ahknee
ahknee on Aug 31 '08
Okay! Thanks.
runningwithcupcakes
runningwithcupcakes on Aug 31 '08
i duno i kinda like that design'but it w=may deffienetly look beter with pastel like said before



this is mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27418/Last_Turn
weagan12
weagan12 on Aug 31 '08
maybe make each of the colors a little bit darker, and def a different color shirt...check mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27503/Redeemer

zenbolic vision
zenbolic vision on Aug 31 '08
style and coliring it good but give it more work adn time

crit me

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27516/popcorn
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