originally a painting. spraypaint and acrylic on watercolor paper. Tell me what you think :)

i've had some trouble transitioning to digital art. any constructive criticism is highly appreciated :)

I like it! But I think it looks a little empty near the top since it's a white shirt. Maybe add spray paint to other parts of the shirt? Good Luck!



Please look at my critique~

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27464/A_Panda_s_Passion



Thanks!

i would play around with the positioning... i agree that it's a little heavy on the bottom.



please check out my critique as well --

http://threadless.com/critique/376505/Do_I_Exist



Thanks and good luck!

Very interesting design and nice to see a spraypaint style work. I'd suggest making the cutting line so that it looks smaller point (less chuncky) and a little more space between dashes. Bringing something in to the top of the tee would balance it more.



If you have the time, I'd love feedback on mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27428/There_s_a_U_shaped_hole_in_my_heart

oh, nice work! i would like it better if you continued the line

different style than normal threadless. i actually like the way it looks in the corner

thanks! i might play around with the placement. 2.0 coming up!

i feel like it should finish stretchign across th eshirt, unless your aiming for one corner



critique my design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27418/Last_Turn