what?!

random, but funny. i would love to seem them fighting, maybe the gorilla on the mail box.

I like it a lot - I would lose the "Alpha male" text on the gorilla shoulder. It makes the joke more subtle.

It's interesting, but I'm not sure I would wear it.

Yeah lost the alpha male text, and an extreme battle scene would make it so much cooler.

yea if it was dented, and cracking or something

critique mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/27418/Last_Turn#v4

Make them battle =D

As a kid, these mailboxes always reminded me of gorillas. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I've tested this before without the "Alpha Male" tattoo, and it seemed the pun was missed. Do y'all think people would get the point without the words?

i don't think you have to lose the text, its not that imposing.

Looks really great!

I get it, but i had to read the title so thats a bad sign. It looks absolutely great the only problem is the execution

I don't think you have to take the text away on the gorilla. I like the background!

Please check out my critique~
http://www.threadless.com/critique/27343/Midnight_in_France

Thanks!