this is my third design hope ya like it

I like this a lot! Nice. Can't find anything that's wrong with it.... but that's just me! =D



Critique mine? Thanks!

thanx, It was hard work.

This is version 2, tell me which version is better, and if the tooth on the green guy better down or up.

bump.

change the shirt color

what color do you suggest.

bump.

tooth looks better up cos blue one has it down and it balances out the mouth better. blue creature seems to have one foot floating and the top outline of the flag needs to not be touching the flag design. i like the style for the two main characters and the fire in the bg. i also think the building shading and the creature shading need to match.

good work so far



please comment mine here

personally i prefer the black outline

neat design..i think i would like it on a white tee. i actually like the white cracked ground from the first version better than the gray one

cute character...but look a bit dull in color...how about brighten it?

Colours would look better on a white tee too ^^

haha its coool yet need some work and a story,, but good workkk

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27516/popcorn

crit me

thanx for the comments I will probably change the color of the tee.

I prefer version1, but with the green character's tooth upwards.

White or black background is best for colourful designs, in my opinion.



pls crit mine too

Thanx I'll try a black and/or white colored shirt.