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Man in West Rome
Man in West Rome on Aug 29 '08
Leonardo da Vinci's beard a la Milton Glaser's famed Dylan poster.
iEatArt
iEatArt on Aug 29 '08
nice concept, i think his head seems a bit big, could he have sideburns as well?
gumbolimbo
   gumbolimbo on Aug 29 '08
i like the seventies style rendering of the head. The black hat(?) thing seems a bit bulky, and the position might be hard to print.

I'd like to see this as a free standing, centered design.
murraymullet
   murraymullet on Aug 29 '08
I love it on the tan. Nice work Man in West. Submit this bad boy!
andynick
andynick on Aug 29 '08
I agree, it looks especially good on the tan shirt, even beter than the sketch on white! I'd put this on my chest.
jordanwharrison
jordanwharrison on Aug 29 '08
I think this shirt is perfect. It is simple, clean, and the colors are beautiful. Being a bit of a purist as far as the Glaser print goes, I think I prefer it on the white (but the tan does look good too). Somebody, make this shirt!
RetroFraggle
RetroFraggle on Aug 29 '08
For those not so familiar with the Dylan print, it may take a second to register that the black is actually a head... maybe make slightly more realistic? If that messes with your idea too much, leave it. It's awesome. Love the colors and beard shapes, especially on the tan.
ninety
ninety on Aug 29 '08
very cool! love the black sillhouette with the colorful beard, looks great on the tan shirt. but the head does look a little big and round, and what happens on the other side of the shirt? does the illo just cut off? I think it would best to have it as a complete image and have it wrap around the shirt. I'd definitely give that a $5.
Pacheli
Pacheli on Aug 29 '08
I like this.. but the silouette maybe more defined..



would you please check mine?
LShayn
LShayn on Aug 29 '08
haha sweet! Love that Milton Glaser! However, can you do this or could it be a problem that it is so similar?



Mind crit'ing mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27334/Still_Haunted_by_Highlights_Hidden_Pictures
gonzo777
gonzo777 on Aug 29 '08
Love it --but think the head is a little too ginormous and eclipses the awesome color work.
wingwalker87
wingwalker87 on Aug 29 '08
I like it. Personally I'm not a beard owner and will never be, but I'm for it.
thadawan
thadawan on Aug 29 '08
this is really cool. It's fantastic as is, but I do have a slight concern about there being too much black, as others have noted. Not a necessary change in my opinion.
Piano
Piano on Aug 29 '08
i agree with iEatArt
velocipedicist
velocipedicist on Aug 29 '08
like the colors, lines etc. but it doesn't really come across as a head/ beard, not in these images here. how about an actual face above those whiskers instead of that big black thing?



will you crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27279/Ocean_Adventure

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