I know this needs work, but I'm a bit stuck with it. any ideas?

you could put an otter in the car eating a fish?

the colors are too subdued

put something up near the right shoulder, like a blimp or something

I like it, nice style. The colors are nice, but maybe not good on the sand colored t-shirt. Try to play around with the colors a little bit. But other than that, I would keep it like that.

great, could one of them be climbing out of a roof hatch or something?

thanks for the feedback!



I darkened the lines, added an otter in the car, and also put in a version with brighter colors. I think I prefer the lighter colors from the first version. what do you think?

I freakin' love Slide 3. Submit!

Personally, I love the teal on slide 3. I think you should submit this ASAP!

I deffenitly like slide three also

Slide 3 is really great

This is Awesome!!!! i like slide 3 too. very nice detailing!

brilliant

Wow this looks wonderful. As many of the others have said I definetely love slide 3.

thanks! I'll definitely go with slide 3, then!

oh my god

i think im in love with this T

Has Jebbie seen this?

i think the car needs to have some lines hinting at the left wheels

this needs to be submited so I can buy it



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wow, I love all of your Designs! Very original, and the style is very appealing to me. I hope to see a lot of your t's for sale!

I like slide 2 and 3 great work

slide3.

definitly

that's awesome! it looks really nice on the shirt. slide 3 for sure



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Hey Ninety, I really love your artwork and I think it's a SHAM that it hasn't been printed yet! I will soon be recieving regular paychecks, and when that day comes I really want to buy prints of your artwork from you, if that would be ok. I'm a marine bio geek and especially interested in sea otters and I'm in love with your "see otters" design (and others!). I can't find another way to contact you, so here's hoping you get this! My e-mail address is transatlanticflight@gmail.com, please contact me if you think we could work something out. I promise I'm not being creepy, I'm just someone who loves art and has blank space on my walls and who is tired of waiting for the threadless community to wise up.



I posted this on one of your other designs, and then I noticed you were thinking of re-subbing this design, so obviously it's not available in other venues at the moment. Good luck, and I hope they make a print of it too! IF, however, threadless is dumb again or you give up on this design for Threadless or whatnot, please do contact me!



Good luck!