A classic game that we used to play as a kid.

Maybe refine the stars? I'm searching for something else you could put instead of crosses to give it a laugh, I know there's something just can't think of it now...
Very cool. Keep working on it.

good design idea. use the color wheel/theory though in choosing ur two colors here. try compliment colors (yellow/purple) or adjacent colors (green/yellow) Just an idea. Keep up the good work!

Good concept. Perhaps more stylised stars, or even remove them all together. The red/yellow is a striking combination.

Good point both on the stars and the colours. I will try the green and yellow combo and see what the feed back is like. I am looking to weave the space ships between each other to add another element. What do you think?

Maybe the astronauts could each be in a slightly different pose?

hey! i think this is a very good idea! i like the colors and concept very much, good job! i'm suppose with a bit of changes mention abt, it is a potential piece of work!

I think this is a great idea. I agree with noelhathorn that they could be in a different pose... maybe acknowledging each-other with a point or something?

Also i think that blues would be effective for this illustration...

yeah relly like it, love the colours and the stack of space ships, try rotatng some of the space men so they angle in different directions

its working but try changing the colors

its hard to see in whats happening

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/27684/peace

what game is it?

I dont get it

I love spacey things. The cosmonauts could be doing something interesting.

hahaha very cute idea... dont love the colors, but thats just me... i like the idea of making the spacemen different. also, perhaps you could jazz up the x-s? very fun idea though :-)

please check out my critique if you get a moment! thanks!

needs more work. you have to put more detail in the draw.
critic mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/27761/In_the_clouds#v2

Sorry please ignore V3 Something went wrong please critique V2

Try satellites instead of Xs.

Or... this is a million dollar idea.

Cosmonauts versus Astronauts. The Soviet suits have a very distinct look that SHOULD look different than the American suits, depending on how you draw it.

hey all is say it very bright whats it like with a darker colour...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/28486/Reds_Revenge

color scheme reminds me of food. Red ans Yellow are said to make people hungry, and have you ever noticed how fast food places use those colors in their logos?

try something less food related for color, like dark blue

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Ya its nice design but I have a thousands of astronauts illustrations on Tees.....So, plz try something else....I like your horse version... that rocks