This is my first design. Please give me some honest feedback, I would appreciate it! =]

I think it's cute, if a bit sad. My only thing would be the rain looks like sprinkles, or confetti, not rain.

Actually I thought the same thing. But I thought making straight lines uniformly as rain drops would be a bit boring. What would you suggest?

I think this sub would be well received here. My only suggestion would be to give it some color, even a subtle amount of color. The idea and design elements are fairly strong, it just needs a little tweaking.

Well, boring or not, I like straight forword lines. If you think it's be too boring, why not little scattered droplets? That'd be neat.



Hell, God knows I'd buy it as is, it's just that my eyes are always drawn to the rain, because it seems wrong to me.

I wanted to make it a bit more colorful, too, but I thought it may have been out of place based on the theme of the shirt.



I'll do some experimentation with the rain and the colors a bit.

I added some color to the rain and changed the streaks.

It is looking better.



What is the white bit in the cloud?

I dunno. It was meant to make it look more like clouds. I guess it doesn't, haha.

Removed white clouds.

I like it way better now! ;D

Right now it kinda feels like the figure getting rained on is actually Satan in disguise and he's secretly happy about being rained on. Is that the idea, or is it that Satan is happy that a guy is getting rained on?

Sorry, didn't realize this was an old submission. Somebody bumped it up today.