I like the Earth, it's a good place to live.



Please leave comments, it really helps! Thanks!

this is a neat illustration! I really dig the tan color shirt. I am not sure if you need the text on there. Maybe add some flecks of stars in the background to get some tecture?

I like the moon's teeth, nice touch!

I know that you're probably trying to make a statement (respect for you here), however, without the words I think this would be a great shirt... oh and possibly the placement, maybe lower with the 'rider' off to the side a bit?

I like it, not sure if i would wear it. But as an illustration it is strong. The text could maybe use a bit of a looser feel, but other than that, this is pretty solid.

Try integrating the type into the design more, maybe instead of having the laeeters on top, have them cut out of the jetstream in a nice hand-drawn font?

Pretty cool but It should be smaller and more to the left I think.

I agree, I think the text would look better if it was intergrated into the jet stream and there needs to be something in the background. I dont think there needs to be much, maybe just a couple of stars here and there. I think the design fits best on the light blue.



If you have time crit Disguised. Thanks.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26604/Disguised_Checking_In

I reworked the moon's tail, added some stars and such.



I liked the type in the original version, but i tried to subtly tie it in with the tail by adding some overlaps.



Leave me a comment and let me know what you think! Thanks!

I like the illustration a lot, especially the moon. But I don't think overlapping the moon's tail with the text helps much. I'd say (and I'm probably in the minority) to keep the text in front of the tail completely.



If you have a moment, would you check mine out as well?

Bikes of Autumn

I think the word "RIDE" has some room to stretch out there, bigger "R", slighty bigger "I", other than that, I'd order 5 of those shirts. I like the blue one best.

Thinking of submitting soon, any more feedback would be greatly appreciated!

latest colors are much better, submit this!



care to crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27279/Ocean_Adventure

I reworked the type a bit so the word "ride" was just a little bigger.



Gunna submit this soon, if you have any comments please post them soon!



Thanks!

Awesome art style! Well done!

lol; not sure I understand it, but it's a good design

sweeet lovely and simple go ahead

crit mien too

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27516/popcorn

awesome.its great. i like the style.

critique mine please

will the moon have eyes

awesome.its great. i like the style.

critique mine please

will the moon have eyes

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27539/salvation_somehow

Cool design. Maybe make the stars fully white, but that's just my personal preference. It would look good either way.



crit mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/27387/Underbelly#v2

i have no idea why... but the mouth kinda looks upside down? could be going crazy. Great idea but i would make the image a little smaller on the tee



hope it helped!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26099/Carrot_and_the_Hare#v4

Submitted this, go and vote for it in all its awesomeness: