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v1 Sea Monster Galore!, 1374 days ago, click to expand
v2 Sea Monster Galore!, current version








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Phinx
Phinx on Aug 20 '08
Thanx Leroy the .gif idea really worked. Ok bigger version bigger monsters, who's your favoite??
JamieMelani
JamieMelani on Aug 20 '08
It's very cute. I think I'd show it on a different color, though. Or maybe darken the waves (not sure how that would look). It seems to fade into the shirt too much. It just needs a little more pop, then I'd say it's ready to submit. I like the zig-zaggy texture, too.



My favorite is the four-eyed orange one :)
Tomtangle
Tomtangle on Aug 20 '08
Wow, I love this, so much going on!
kiokaye
kiokaye on Aug 20 '08
I disagree with JamieMelani, I like that the waves blend into the shirt!



Hmm.. to make it 'pop' like she says... maybe a sunken treasure chest at the bottom corner of the shirt?

What goes better with sea monsters other than guarded treasure!!



My favorite is the upside down white one... reminds me of that one pokemon XD



$5, I'd totally buy it (if my mom lets me roflol) :D



PS. I'm fairly new... I really don't get why ppl rate designs in '$'??
Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Aug 20 '08
Phinx, this is great. My only crit would be a different color shirt.



kiokaye, the $ means you mark "I'd buy it" when you rate a sub. $5 is the highest score you can give a design.
dasmoo
dasmoo on Aug 20 '08
love the design. Only crit, I think the water blends into the shirt a little too much i think a darker color could fix that. I like the one tooth purple one the most.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/26760/Thank_You
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 21 '08
Thanks you guys for your comments. And before I go to for the night, BUMP!!
filmfreakk
filmfreakk on Aug 21 '08
Wow. I really love this. This is really the kinda style I want to learn to produce. I'd give this a 5 for sure.



It'd be great if you could give me some feedback on my critique. Thanks!
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 21 '08
BUMP!



Phinx
Phinx on Aug 21 '08
This might just be my best critique yet. I'll be submitting soon. Thanx for the comments.
velocipedicist
velocipedicist on Aug 21 '08
good design colors and textures are great. only thing is i'm a little tired of the cutesey japenese characters, i'm sure i;m the only one though. submit this, it has a good chance
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 21 '08
Japanese??
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 21 '08
BuuuuMP!
organicly
organicly on Aug 21 '08
hi
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 22 '08
Ok this is officially sub'd so check it out there not there.
djofarrell
djofarrell on Aug 22 '08
this is cool! send me the link so i can vote$5!!

If you have a mo could you give some feedback?

http://threadless.com/critique/373777/Grafiti_Lizard
brittamer
brittamer on Aug 22 '08
yea! i wouldn't change this a bit
cream_of_tartar
cream_of_tartar on Aug 22 '08
Great designs, great colors, I'd wear it!



Check out this Shameless Plug
banziebillbob
banziebillbob on Aug 22 '08
wat is shameless plug? i like the worms! well done. see mine?
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 23 '08
banziebillbob did you read the title. They not worms they are Sea Monsters.
Mochou
Mochou on Aug 23 '08
Sea Monters every where... nice try mate!
davidfromdallas
   davidfromdallas on Aug 23 '08
great style - can't wait to see how it does. Well done!
4 days later
Phinx
Phinx on Aug 28 '08
CHeck out the sub it's up for scoring now.
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