a little somethin' somethin' in the works.

i like the light, and the yellow shirt color is really pleasing. right now, i'd just work on the folds and creases of the blanket.

I agree with the folds comment, try using your own bed sheets if you need some help getting them right.



It might also be cool to make it so the light coming from the lamps is glow in the dark.



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Great concept. I agree the blanket seems to need most, if not all the work. Maybe the edition of a few more bedroom elements, like a nightstand or a picture on the wall with lamp children (desk lamp, flashlight?). Good stuff.

yeah, nice concept! Agree w/ the above, about the blankets. Give us a v2!

this is going to take a lot more work, but i just wanted to show the general room layout now. the pictures in the frames will all be different by the end.

looks better already

the pictures are all different now, but i'm unsure about the light being emitted. any suggestions? or preference between these 2?



the only thing lost in the 2nd one is rounded heart.

its fun but off is there a way you could characterise them more?

i always go into more detail at the end. i know the poles are a bit weak on the lamps right now, so hopefully some more detail will give them some character. i will definitely work on it though, thanks.

This may pop a bit more if the background was a darker color right now it kinda looks like their in a room lit by a small sun. At the same time tho i really like this color scheme. Id say try it quickly in photoshop if ya like it go with it if not keep it as is.



I really like the heart design that they make in the top pic. but it feels kinda floaty you could put the wall shadow on it at the top of the heart to make it look like the lights are hitting the wall at an angle.



over all i like alot.

When I first saw the top one, I was completely confused what I was looking at. I thought the spotlight on the wall was an actual object. The second is obvious, but I like the top better, it just needs some lines where teh light hits the wall.



What about making the room dark so the spot lights stand out more. Then again, those lights really shouldn't be spot lights. Nice feel over all.

yeah i'm a bit torn with the colors. i like this palette a lot, but i guess its a bit hard to see. any other shirt color just looks wrong though.

I like it the bottom one, and don't mind the colour as they are both turned on which would make the room bright any ways. Put it in I say.