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fatheed on Feb 12 '07 Ok. Here is what I think might be the final version. If there's going to be any changes, I need suggestions very soon! Placement is as above. I messed about with different positions, but I think this size and placement was the best. Let me know! Ta.
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Top placment mate, submit as is. Best i've seen on here!
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fatheed on Feb 12 '07 Cheers babyape. I need somehelp though to decide whether I should submit it for a Loves Threadless comp, or just the ongoing comp. The Josh Ritter Loves kinda works - the theme being 'The Animal Years'. The Big Buck Hunter Loves is 'The Great American Hunter' - which works, but might be more appropriate with a star spangled banner hanging off the back of the Jeep, as there are not many Rhinos in the States. Apparently. Your feedback is required and very welcome!
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Torakamikaze on Feb 12 '07 i want this tatooed to my face
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dude, this critique page is awesome
showing teh stages of development is really neat o nice work! |
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awesome.
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fatheed on Feb 12 '07 Cheers guys. I hate to bump my own, but I need some ideas concerning my last post on how to submit.
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sub it now.
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Either the Josh Ritter or the ongoing comp. Either way I reckon it's going to do well. Suppose it depends on what you want to win ;)
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yeah, look at the prizes and decide what you want to win:-)
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fatheed on Feb 12 '07 Thats very kind of you guys, lol. I think I'll drop it into the running for the Josh Ritter comp. There's amazing subs in both, but the 'Couldn't see but for the socks... sub is in the Big Buck one and that can't have a contender. Plus - this is severely lacking in Deer. Any ideas before I sub - fire away.
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this is tremendous.
great work, should score really highly. brilliant design and i love the way the initial concept has grown through this blog. can't heap enough praise, so i'll stop now! |
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Awesome design- I love the idea! I'd buy it in a heartbeat. (:
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fatheed on Feb 12 '07 Cheers. Now subbed under the Josh Ritter Loves comp. Thanks for you thoughts and help guys.
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Kojima on Feb 12 '07 This is a winner!!!!!!!!!!
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i enjoyed watching the process behind ur work. i hope this wins indeeed!
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subsubsub!
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Flying Mouse on Feb 13 '07 Submit it yet??
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Flying Mouse on Feb 13 '07 Very Cool Design!!
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THANK YOU.
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fatheed on Feb 13 '07 |
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fatheed on Feb 13 '07 WHY?!?! Sorry. Here's the link, please copy and paste...
http://www.threadless.com/submission/110436/Rhinos_Hunt_In_Packs/showmore,designs Apologies for the Copy/Paste drama |
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I LOVE the cool and innovative design but if the shirt color could be altered then that would be PERFECTION - $4
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I thought this design was funny and original. The color scheme is awesome and I liked the shirt color you put it on :D
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Very good
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Fantastic!
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Damn. This is a definite winner! So, how you gonna spend your $1500?
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you're amazing
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The awesomeness. Although the rhinos don't really look like they're poised to strike, which might be an improvement. Maybe you could draw one stomping the ground with one of his front paws?
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Prediction: Showing the gradual process like you did will become a standard marketing tool for people's designs either via critiques or shown on peoples submissions via flash.
Phenomenal work. |
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hey i'm surprised you have not submitted this yet, maybe you are a perfectionist but it would be a $5 for me as it is. the rhinos as they are, are great and understated in a foreboding way which works well. get it subbed and you'll be a definite winner, and I think I'll have two, one for me and one for my brother in law in zimbabwe who's had a few scrapes with wildlife himself.
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PERFECT!!!
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this sub is great! i especially like the step by step progress u shared with us! gives me lots of insight!
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I'd like to see V2 on a Tee. Like the unfinished look. Would look great on white.
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I love how you showed process for your design, i'll be rootin that this one gets on a tee!
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Absolutely awesome, would buy it and wear it always
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in love
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looks great!
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Congrats on getting printed!
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amazing!!! would buy..
http://www.threadless.com/critique/3411/Protection |
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fatheed on May 24 '07 Put your money where your mouth is! It went up for sale 3 days ago. Lol.
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:P that's funny
congrats fatheed! |
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i saw this on the front page the first day i went on this site. that must mean u did something right.
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I really like the simplicity of v3 actually, but they are all very nice.
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Freakin' sweet!! :D
Sub version 5! |
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Hi Fatheed. please don't delete this because I want to show someone your awesome, awesome sketch. I just had a discussion with some illustration friends about how I think people are missing out becuase they don't work their illustrations out in detail on paper first —and do a crappy sketch thinking they can use computer magic to make it better. I think if the sketch you make isnt a 5$ to begin with— then its probably not going to be a $5. Your sketch was a $5.
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fatheed on Jul 18 '07 I won't delete it. Thanks jasper :-)
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fatheed on Jul 18 '07 And you're spot on. Pencil and paper is king. The rest is easy if you do the first bit right.
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grayehound on Jul 18 '07 i'm totally there with ya on the sketch-before-you-wrok thang, but there are folks on here (d3d for example) who do awesome work without a paper and pencil sketch. i dunno how he does it, but his stuff rocks too.
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fatheed on Jul 18 '07 I think glennz also mentioned that he launches straight into illustrator. Great if you can do it - but it does produce something quite different from a design that began it's life on a piece of paper.
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yeohgh on Jul 18 '07 fatheed, great to see your process of making. welldone! love your work!
p/s: missed to buy this shirt, cos it ran out before i get my order in time,,! :D |
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This is really awesome, I would totally wear it.
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I really enjoyed the progression on this one. Your a pretty damn good arteest! Cheers!
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about the five rhinos... they need to have footsteps at their back, have you noticed this, anyway i gave this an awesome :)
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i like it, but I like the designs to be slightly bigger on the tshirt so we can really see on second glance that the rhino is a cut-out!
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Do people not read at all? This design has been long subbed and printed and sold out ... why are you still giving advice?
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i want it!
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againstbound on Dec 04 '07 hey fatheed, wanna gimme a little feedback? ;D, seems youre a veteran here http://www.threadless.com/critique/10599/ad_astra_spasea
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Funny I like it!
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This is an awesome shirt on it's own, but when you can also see how it was made it makes it that much cooler. Kind of the opposite effect from magicians revealing their tricks...
Drawn to Genius |
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Torakamikaze on Dec 26 '07 dont submit this fatheed
there's no chance of it winning |
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its getting better and better, but i think it could be better organized for placement on a shirt
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love it!!
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Torakamikaze on Dec 27 '07 i agree with Torakamikaze, this is awful. Don't submit.
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lol. Congrats on this getting an award and shuttin' down them haters.
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Out. Freaking. Standing!!
I love this kind of art. It's very Gary Larson's Far Side. Submit, and I'll buy one! |
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Wow. This is amazing. The way you showed your process throughout in the critique is not something many other people will do, but I have no doubt it will start becoming popular, considering you won an award for it. Job well done on the design, I'm crossing my fingers for a reprint.
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Most impressive and entertaining.
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love it, love it, love, it, i'd buy it in a second! send me a medium.
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hilarious witha capital H!
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fantastic!:D
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submit!!!
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OMG ! Absolutely Amazing. Great skill you have. can't wait for this to be printed.
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nice, can see all the work youput in, turned out cool.. gj
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Wow this one is really good. I'll vote for it.
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I'd buy it. Submit it, nice job!
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Submit it! I'd buy this one right now right here!!!
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it printed ...!
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fatheed on Apr 01 '08 I sense an opportunity!
***THIS DESIGN WAS PRINTED!*** YAY! WOOT! CLICK HERE TO BUY IT OR ORDER A REPRINT IF IT IS OUT OF STOCK! |
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Oh Geez! This is so great....
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Torakamikaze on Apr 03 '08 Torakamikaze on Dec 27 '07
i agree with Torakamikaze, this is awful. Don't submit. |
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very good
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fuk n awsome
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Go4it!
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Haha I love this.
Help me on mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/23213/Sublimation_T_r_ee |
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really made me laugh!!!!!
nice!!!! If you have 25 hours, pls find some time to critique my first ever post....thanks, welcome, happy new year, merry christmas and yosh. AREGATO! |
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awsome!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29728/noob_mixtape |
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I would make love to this shirt.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/28144/quot_The_Way_The_Sun_Hits_Her_quot |
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genius. i just wanna stare at it and share it with others!! good luck!! i'm sure it'll get printed!
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I love it, though to tell you the truth I dunno if its a good t-shirt. It looks awkward on the t-shirt but its really freaking hilarious / awesome and so yeah. Submit!
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ginetteginette on Oct 21 '08 |
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Pretty awesome, submit!
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ginetteginette on Oct 21 '08 holy hell. does no one bother to read?
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ivejustquitsmoking on Oct 21 '08 lolz
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hahaha GREAT SHIRT LOOKS AT MINE PLZ
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I like this a whole lot! very well done and it is very humorous....my only suggestion is not on that colour shirt, although it works well it makes the whole thing look less interesting than it really is
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SOLD OUT?! people need to get vote for a reprint! I NEED ONE DAMT!
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nice
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Real great!!
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this is great. rhino's unite!
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If this is printed and sold out and was put in here ´07 it should be taken out off the critique section.
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Nice!
Only thing that I might add is something the Rhino's use to hunt the man down with. Guns, Sniffing Dog, etc something funny though. Critique Me! |
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Oh, you silly gooses! This design has been submitted! And printed!
Reading - stimulates your brain, and makes you not look stupid. :^) |
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Torakamikaze on May 27 '09 |
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fatheed on May 24 '07 Put your money where your mouth is! It went up for sale 3 days ago. Lol.
fatheed on Dec 04 '07 GO HERE and request a reprint then! ;-) fatheed on Apr 01 '08 I sense an opportunity! ***THIS DESIGN WAS PRINTED!*** YAY! WOOT! |
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This is fantastic! Thanks for the inspiration and process shots...
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I comppletely dig it!
It is a winner, for sure! |
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this will never print in a million years
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FYI, the Rhino, top left is a flat 'scenery' Rhino. No Rhinos were hurt in the making of this design.