Need a lot of critique please.



-Definitely some advice on the text.

-Maybe some advice on body shape.

-Help with placement of ballots.

Font choice for the text is a bad idea, doesn't read well. Should be solid text.

Added blush, made a way better decision on placement of ballots. FONT CHANGED finally.

Try hand-lettering the text, or using a non-standard font. It will make the text not seem so MS_word-y.

something not right with the font you've used... otherwise, it's brilliant... I like it!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26673/teledistruction

yeah, font change, and I know it's kind of the point, but I think it would be better without the pamphlets, or at least not in his hands, I think they looked better while still in his pockets. Maybe buttons? Check out my critique.