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v1 A Meeting of Gentlemen, 1381 days ago, click to expand
v2 A Meeting of Gentlemen, current version








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ninety
ninety on Aug 14 '08
ok, here is a version with some shading on the bushes. is this any better?
NomadSlim
   NomadSlim on Aug 14 '08
This is very nice, 2nd version looks nicer compared to the first. The tree trunk looks a little light in comparison to things, but other than that I say it is ready for submitting. Have you tried it on any other colors?
mismo y dismo
mismo y dismo on Aug 14 '08
I do not see a difference, you're done!





http://www.threadless.com/critique/26285/Bucket_of_Longnecks_redux
Susan S.
Susan S. on Aug 14 '08
I like this quite a bit and think the drawing is splendid. I wonder if less might be more in terms or removing the shading around the tree roots? & just leave a plain horizon line extending to right and left - just draws the eye a little from the creatures
Bialehmann
Bialehmann on Aug 14 '08
i like this way.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/26608/centrado
Wa5hwa5h
Wa5hwa5h on Aug 14 '08
I think this is really nice!! I love the expression on the lizard's face. I think it's ready.



If you have time, please crit mine.
againstbound
   againstbound on Aug 14 '08
This looks great as usual! If you're going to try other colors I think sand would work, but either way is really good.
ninety
ninety on Aug 14 '08
thanks for the help! I'll try some different tee colors, but this is the version I'll submit :)



celery
celery on Aug 15 '08
excellent stuff, i'm looking forward to seeing tis printed
ivejustquitsmoking
   ivejustquitsmoking on Aug 15 '08
good to go!
ewok9939
ewok9939 on Aug 15 '08
I really like this, the only thing that bugs me is the dogs pipe being gold. Never seen a gold pipe, but thats just a nit-picky comment. I think it would work with the pipe being gold. I also agree with the shirt color being cream, the olive seems really dark.



Thanks for critiquing mine. Crit my new version of Disguised if you have time.



http://www.threadless.com/profile/772203/ewok9939/critiques
ninety
ninety on Aug 15 '08
subbed! with a sand tee option. thanks for all the help!
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