I think I'm about done with this, but thought I'd post it here first. is it ready to submit?



also, gold foil option on the yellow parts

I really like the idea for this tee!



The lizard is hella tight and the cat is pretty cool; although, i think the dog is a little too big.



I dont think the yellow should be gold foil. It would make it a little strange in my opinion and think it would be out of place on this tee.



Possibly a different tee color besides the greenish, in order to draw more attention to the design?

Overall very good tee. Hope to see it printed in the future.

Nuthin to crit :) too good

I dig the colours, cool illo. Submit, but without foil.

haha, ok, no foil. thanks!

i know it would be a huge pain... but have you thought about adding some shading to the leaves, kinda like on the cat or dog?

ok, here is a version with some shading on the bushes. is this any better?

This is very nice, 2nd version looks nicer compared to the first. The tree trunk looks a little light in comparison to things, but other than that I say it is ready for submitting. Have you tried it on any other colors?

I do not see a difference, you're done!





http://www.threadless.com/critique/26285/Bucket_of_Longnecks_redux

I like this quite a bit and think the drawing is splendid. I wonder if less might be more in terms or removing the shading around the tree roots? & just leave a plain horizon line extending to right and left - just draws the eye a little from the creatures

i like this way.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/26608/centrado

I think this is really nice!! I love the expression on the lizard's face. I think it's ready.



If you have time, please crit mine.

This looks great as usual! If you're going to try other colors I think sand would work, but either way is really good.

thanks for the help! I'll try some different tee colors, but this is the version I'll submit :)

excellent stuff, i'm looking forward to seeing tis printed

good to go!

I really like this, the only thing that bugs me is the dogs pipe being gold. Never seen a gold pipe, but thats just a nit-picky comment. I think it would work with the pipe being gold. I also agree with the shirt color being cream, the olive seems really dark.



Thanks for critiquing mine. Crit my new version of Disguised if you have time.



http://www.threadless.com/profile/772203/ewok9939/critiques

subbed! with a sand tee option. thanks for all the help!