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corey8
corey8 on Feb 08 '07
and his wife hated that he had a successful season.

let 'er rip
r.o.b.o.t.i.c.octopus
   r.o.b.o.t.i.c.octopus on Feb 08 '07
it's just ugly is all.
ISABOA
   ISABOA on Feb 08 '07
What kind of season was he successful in?



the wire to the nail on the wall is not right. There does not seem to be any tension.
Petanca
Petanca on Feb 09 '07
I think you have a very personal style, so I'm not going to criticize it since it is what you like to do and I think each should do what they like. But as a t-shirt, this idea will probably not work well, at least I think it won't do well hre in Threadless. The concept behind ( guy being hanged up as a deer) isn't very interesting to me either.In short, keep the style but search for another subject, that is my opinion.
corey8
corey8 on Feb 09 '07
thanks for the feedback! i agree with all of what you all said. he is one ugly bastard - i sure as hell wouldnt wear this. :)



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TheIntern
TheIntern on Feb 10 '07
You need to communicate the fact that his wife did this. Not just that someone wanted a trophy of the ugliest s.o.b. ever. Well done on the illustration though.
corey8
corey8 on Feb 10 '07
(i was thinking of this for the big buck hunter pro loves - buck teeth, dunno if that was obvious?) i think im gonna scrap it though.
squintygirl
squintygirl on Feb 10 '07
The ear hair is freaking ingenious.
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simcha123456
simcha123456 on Apr 19 '09
COOL TEATH !
zw33t
zw33t on Apr 19 '09
yea it's an ugly ugly shirt lol but the illustration is great!! xD



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