My first foray into the World of Wacom ! Wacom + pencil and pen tool in Illy.



Quite a different direction for me stylistically, but I think it didn't come out too bad.



2 color gradient print.



Let me know what you think!! THANKS!

def. cool but it just looks like you made all the lines/grass and then removed erased the shape of the animals from that. I think it would work better if the grass made up all the lines for the animals, instead of the lines being cut out if the grass. good colors too

It look pretty amazing. I would like to see it on a different coloured Tshirt tho. Great job!!!

agree with a diff tee color, lookin good so far :)

Thanks for the crits you guys!



I'm gonna give making the grass make up the animals a shot, and maybe try different tee colors, silver maybe? I will try a different color scheme as well, to see how that works.



What do you think about placement?

I like it, i think the lions eye shapes need a bit of work. Try and make the left one a bit more like the right.

I also think a solid colour would work better than a gradient.



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Ok, for V2, I integrated the lion a little better into the design, chose a silver shirt, changed placement.



The gradient is a little more subtle out on this one, I don't know if it looks better than v1.



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My first foray into the World of Wacom ! Wacom + pencil and pen tool in Illy.



Quite a different direction for me stylistically, but I think it didn't come out too bad.



2 color gradient print.



Let me know what you think!! THANKS!

nice but the placement is not the best or the relation between the shirt and the graphic is not so good. make it bigger :D







please comment my design if you have a moment: http://www.threadless.com/critique/26407/GLOBETROTTER#v3

Thoughts on shirt color? Placement?



Thanks!

anyone?

a blue shirt might look nice

and i agree, fix the placement. i'm not so sure they can print over seams



crit me?? :)

the style of the tiger doesn't match with the other animals. the lines are too clean. i like it though.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/25704/t_shirt

i kind of like the tiger but the leopard looks like clip art

Different color scheme, re-drew the tiger, to give him a more integrated look.



Let me know what you think!!



Thanks!!



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Ok, for V2, I integrated the lion a little better into the design, chose a silver shirt, changed placement.



The gradient is a little more subtle out on this one, I don't know if it looks better than v1.



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My first foray into the World of Wacom ! Wacom + pencil and pen tool in Illy.



Quite a different direction for me stylistically, but I think it didn't come out too bad.



2 color gradient print.

this is tight dude, so what program do you use j/w?

a hawk, lion, and tiger??? am i missing something???



perhaps making them all from the cat family... that hawk is throwing me off..



:)

Oo this is kind of neat. I wonder how it would look with that same golden tone only on a black shirt?

I use illustrator CS, I usually sketch out my designs on paper, scan them in, and in this case used a wacom tablet to trace and create the line patterns.



The reason it has a hawk/lion/tiger, is it started out as a collage of predators, and I guess it evolved into this..



I will definitely try it with a black background!



Thanks for the crits!

oooh this is nice.



but I agree with drmtama2... maybe change the hawk into a cheetah?

no..i alike the hawk...

dont take it too seriously, its just a picture with badass animals.



this is cool, and look like it took forever lol.

do wacoms work well? im considering getting one.

Thanks! One idea I had, is to change the hawk into a house cat, because I don't want this to turn into a generic-y shirt like you could buy in a zoo, and to illustrate how, after all, they are family.



Would this be a cool idea?



Also, I bought the cheap wacom, the bamboo ($60ish on amazon) and although it takes some getting used to, I really like it!!

nice!! the only nitpick I have is the lion's eyes. it freaks me out that they're sort of scribbly, I think they should be filled in all the way.



otherwise it's great. the yellow tee looks good, but maybe try some other colrs before subbing it. and it would be nice to see it on an actual model in your final sub.

wow! really like this. you are very talented with line composition. my only crit is i wish the lions eyes were as dramtic as the other two. great piece!

Thank you!! I will try some other colors, and also work on the lion's eyes a bit :)

I really like the style here. I dont' think there's much change on this design, but I did notice that the cheetah's ear sort of sits above everything, while every other aspect blends really well. It's a minor change- I think you may be getting close to subimmion!



Crit mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26536/Dance#v2

i think adding a housecat would be cool. i wanted to put it in our photobook of south africa, but my bf didn't let me do that..

Very nice!! My only nit pick comment is lose the two loopholes, middle far left and lover right. Kinda distracting to the style methinks..



Good to go, hit that submit button :)



drop by my crit section too btw :)

I'm liking the white shirt with the purple to blue gradient better. But this color scheme says African Plains to me so it works. Just my preference.



Good luck!

This looks friggin awesome!!!!! I'll buy it when it wins!!!

great sketching!! totally love it! :)

definitely the best version yet. :3

Wow, you guys have given me great crits!!!



In v4, I have removed the hawk and added a housecat, I think this will be more along the lines of "Family Ties" for a title, or something like that.



I am working on color schemes and t colors, so let me know if you like this style, or v3 better.



THANKS A LOT !!!!!!

Sick! Submit this.

nice!

i think the cat's ear is a bit too big. for the rest submit!

oooh thanx for the crits you guys!!! What do you think about the color schemes? this v or the previous one?

i think i prefer the yellow orange scheme.

Submit this already! It's awsome!

hmm. i like the hawk :))



btw i think you can option two color schemes, ver 2 color is ok to me too

Love this, great colours

I like this one better, but havng both options showing never hurts. Just use the one you like best as the large preview and show placement in the alternate or both.

great drawn loves contest sub!



really slick

thanks guys!

I love everything about v3. colours, hawk, everything

i like the kitty-cat, but i do like the v3 color scheme a lot. although v4's colors are pretty rockin' as well. (i say provide us with two options in the final submission.)

i agree with Nandaaah about the ear, but other than that it's ready! can't wait to give it a $5.

I like V3's colors. Very cool piece!

Thank you all for your crits!! I am currently working on my first flash template sub for this, it will prolly be v3, with a v4 color option!!

i like the colors from v3 better as well, but i prefer the kitty in v4.

really like the colors but how is the gradient going to be printed? does threadless convert all gradients to halftones?

It's up for voting!! Please do so if you like it..

http://www.threadless.com/submission/175862/Welcome_to_the_Jungle/

Beautiful line work! I guess submit it! Good luck!

looks good... i like the way you did the cats ears

Very cool style. Gradient works well. Maybe try some other color options. Also try making the top cat's eyes a little more keen/slimmer...?



Feedback on mine would be appreciated

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