I need help! I'm messing around with this design and trying to decide if I should go with ghost version or regular version....or if it's worth it at all. All and any input is appreciated.

I prefer the ghost version, however the tail could use some tweaking.

Yeah, that's my quick tail version.

I agree the ghost version makes more sense with the caption and the tail does need some work. Maybe a different techinque besides half tone or have the half tone go up farther and become closer to the shirt color towards the bottom.



Crit my designs if you have time. Thanks.

http://www.threadless.com/profile/772203/ewok9939/critiques

i like pirates.

maybe he could have some more piratey accessories, a cutlass hanging from a belt?

check out my design

http://www.threadless.com/submission/173704/This_Be_My_Tee

me likes the ghost, does make more sense :)

ghost v