What do you think about this?



Strengths, Weaknesses?

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I like the colour palette and the fact that you've used the pick objects to break it up a bit.



Taking a look at the design it looks a little like the nostril is just floating in space given that there's nothing to describe the nose.



I think that the edge of the face could benefit from having the cheekbone defined a little; at the moment it's just a single curve and it looks a little too artificial as a result to me.



There's something about the lips/teeth that doesn't quite sit right with me as well, i think it might be that it looks like the top lip is straight (closed) and the bottom lip is open but you can see the top teeth but I'm not sure.



It's a nice design all in all but I think you might suffer a little in the scoring for being a bit too close to summer wind.



Good luck.

Summer wind?

oh dang, the palette is super simular. . . :/

Yeah, sorry, should have put a link in there.

at first i thought this was a tribute to the percentage blog

but this is cool too.

idk what to critique i guess

Should I fix anything, I plan on reworking the face a bit, true or not to the face of my model (she has a gummy smile) which is why the mouth is different that what you are used to seeing.

Should I discontinue this because of it's simularities to "summer wind"

Hey thanks again nocturnal for your comments.

It sucks that we both did something very similar to another design.. worst part they both have been printed.. gives less chance to us I think.. :(

Good luck anyway if you choose to keep going with this, and great start btw! I like the face.. not a big fan of the pink stars, maybe without them or just another color?

The mouth does seem a little odd, it's almost like it's too big or something. Other than that I like it, not a fan of the pink, but that's probably just a personal preference.



I wouldn't discontinue this. You may as well sub it and see what people think. It probably wont print, just because of the "Summer Wind" design, but oh well. If you do sub, maybe you should make it known that you are aware of the other design so people don't accuse you of trying to rip it off.

Thanks emem :)

too toothy a smile



look

http://www.threadless.com/critique/26342/AAAUUUMMM

link doesn't work man :)

I like the stylized look. I think you should have a go at submitting this.

thanks, I submitted a bit ago, Just so i can get more crit,



I plan on adding a bit of cheek bone to it, and if i get enough negitive responce on the mouth, i'll rework that a bit too.