Please help me out! I'm not sure if the message is clear of what is going on. Also I was wondering if I should add some other things like more lines to make the "cloud" look puffier. Also I thought about adding other space items, like planets and whatnot. So give me some feedback please!

i don't know what's going on if that helps.

Well, its an astronaut that has let go of his space shuttle. So.....i guess if thats not clear....i should change that.

it's not clear, but i also REALLY like the design. so don't change too much

alright, good to know!

I think he's letting all his oxygen out. Space suicide?

i agree with jellys - it looks like suicide. i think that regardless you should puffen up the cloud, and you can go without space items.
but do something with the hose...

please crt me 2:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25806/TV_Buddha

I like the design a lot. You can't tell if he is attached to a shuttle or not, but that's a good thing, IMO. It gives the design a touch of strangeness that works very well.

It wasn't really intended to look like suicide, but rather just letting go of your cares. Hmmm, but i do love the title "SPACE SUICIDE!". haha.

would say neeeeds more work.,.. and time i dont like the cyan,, try sth else, add stars,, meteors or wat ever its space so why not give it nicer deeper image?
crit me
http://www.threadless.com/critique/25942/dancing_with_life

worked on color schemes and puffiness!

HELP ME!

I mean, I'd wear the black/purple one, but I don't know how it'd do on threadless with no theme, y'know? I can't see anything to change about it, I just don't know how it'd do in the running.

You should get a local printing company to print it and ship me one. Mens small.
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I guess it does really look like oxygen coming out of the guy. What else would it be? So I guess I need to put a rocket ship in and have the cloud coming from that.

You really don't think it has a theme? I'm still not sure.

I think it's great. Not everything needs a theme. Sometimes an awesome illustration is enough.

Thanks!

You could always give it a shot. The worst that happens is that it doesn't get printed and you will get more feedback on it. I think its ready to go. The only thing that I could see it having a problem with here is how solid the colors are. You normally see very textured and washed colors or something. Who knows though! If I were you and this is how I want the design to look, I'd submit.

Would you guys please give my design a look at?

I like the purple on black version. I wouldn't change this, it's nice that the viewer is made to wonder what's going on, and perhaps draw their own conclusions.

It may not be a guaranteed print, but it's worth a try. If you change it too much it may lose it's charm.

If you were to change something, I'd consider what aboutandy said. Maybe distress the cloud? I wouldn't say it's necessary though.

I agree with what both Emem and aboutandy said but it's not totally necessary. The black and purple version is good. I like the idea - I don't think I'd ever have the guts to let go that much though haha

Check my design out! Feedback's appreciated:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29924/Road_to_My_Heart

I love it as-is, on the light shirt! Submit!

take a look at mine! Barbeque Bum Fight