I'm looking for a lot of help with this one, this is just a basic sketched idea (incomplete I might add). The idea is to have the cheese holding something dangerous to the mice; poison? knife? fork?



Need suggestions for that, also need to decide whether it should stay black and white sketched, or if it should get flushed out into colour. I mocked it up in some colour previously, and can upload a colour version if that's where people are leaning. More or less anything is up for change, positions, placements, items, etc.



I appreciate any and all advice/tips/criticism, constructive or otherwise. If you take a look please leave me with any impressions, so I can build on this.



Thanks in advance!

Seriously any comment at all would be greatly appreciated...

you can start by filling it in with color. i also dont really get it.

I don't get it....the cheese on a stick has what purpose?



Flushed with colour I think...I like the actual drawing.

I see the potential...The thing on the right should be some kind of trap, perhaps a net?