Just something I've been playing around with.



An ultraviolent tale of vengeance on the slopes of Mt. Fuji.



Involving snowmen.

anyone?

Not bad, not bad. Only pasrt I don't like as of now is the winning snowman's mouth, to me they just don't look connected enough to make a facial expressionn and the right (his left) arm. It should be more connected where the shoulder is, and maybe just have the stick bend like a real arm. The rest is very cool.

hahaha, I like it :D



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http://www.threadless.com/critique/25832/gretel_likes_to_cut_and_paste

Ha, funny! And a cool aesthetic too. Skiot has some good suggestions, I would take those. Also, I wonder what this would look like if the splatter were more controlled? For example, I would try removing the light blue and white splatter that you're using as background and then really highlight the snowman violence with just white splatters in place of the dark blue ones coming out of the dead snowman and a majestic spray of white coming off the sword. Keep the traces of light blue shadow and see how that looks. Just a suggestion - but I do feel like the image is kind of overpowered by the background and that you can still use the splatter effect, but a little differently, for more effect.

I like it, it's f'n funny as hell...



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Thanx

Wow great crits you guys! I will definitely try to make the snowman's expression better, and his arms, as well as the splatter.

the only thing I would say is I agree with the thought above about the snowmans mouth. Besides for that it's awesome.

agree with the other comments. Also think it should be centered on the shirt.

Now with improved snowmen! Different Splatter patterns!! Placement changes!!!



Let me know, thanks!

i think its readY!!!!

crit mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25978/food_analysis

I don't really think this is something Threadless would print, I mainly just did it for fun, but it came out OK, I think. I will still sub this, what the hell.



Anyone want to comment on the splatter?

Yeah the splatter is pretty good. A lot better than V1.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/23659/Whale_Trail

Yeah, I don't see it getting printed unless you made it more comedic or light. It's really grave and KillBill right now, even though it's snowmen.



I think the new splatter pattern takes away from the scene. wayyy too much. And also, I don't like the splatter at all. if you hand drew the splatters where you wanted them it'd look way better, in my opinion.

photoshop splatter effect is way overdone

very good!!! mutch better tahn the first one

55 I love it. I think it's close to being ready.



The sword on the floor looks a bit strange and some of the outlines could be improved, i guess (e.g. the outline of the nose of the dead one feels a bit too thick).

Too much splatter methinks

Very funny design.

The monument in the background may have a different color than the "blood".

You may also have cut the dead snowman's nose in small parts :)



http://www.threadless.com/critique/26721/Awesome